Hey there! So I think you're off to a really great start here. I enjoyed the history lesson Hermione gave, and I felt that you're developing Rose's character exceptionally well. The one mistake I found was: "There was silence at Rose gave her mother a funny sort of look." Other than that, wonderful writing! I'm defintely intrigued and will continue to follow this story. xDAuthor's Response: Oh, haha. Silly me. :P Thank you so much! I'm glad that you've liked the first chapter and will hopefully like the ones after it. Thanks for taking the time to stop by and leave a review. ^_^ Report Review
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