:') i forgot how good a writer you were, keep it up. xAuthor's Response: thank you so much daisy.
will do, i'm writing like a beast right now ;) x Report Review
It was awesome!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue!!Author's Response: thank you so much :D
I'm just putting the next one up now so it should be validated in about a week :) Report Review
write more. now.
you know what i'm like when i'm angry.Author's Response: I'm writing right now, just for you ;)
I do know what you're like, and it scares me... Report Review
You know what, dear Jess, I might actually pefure your story to JK's, DON'T TELL HER I SAID THAT THOUGH. :| xoAuthor's Response: Aw, Beth. I LOVE YOU.
I won't, my lips are sealed ;) it'll be our little secret, xx Report Review
Awesome chapter, I love it!
Have an awesome day!Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Have an awesome day too!
I love your enthusiasm by the way :) Report Review
Keep writing please - I NEED to find out how this ends.
It's become a necessity now.
You're an amazing writer. I really feel like I'm part of the story.Author's Response: I'm so grateful. That's exactly what I was aiming for - the story to be believable.
I'll spit out another chapter as soon as I can. I'm just doing some fine tuning at the moment.
Thanks for taking the time to review. Report Review
this is good, siriusly ;-)
i can't wait to read on, so i better do that now.
this story deserves cookies.Author's Response: Haha, original ;)
Well, I'm not going to turn down cookies!
Thanks for that review, it made me smile. Report Review
You always have a knack of somehow making it end well but still leaves you wanting more, kinda addictive I guess. I think it was definately the right choice to chop it in half, it makes it into much more manageable chunks and makes the story flow quicker, if you know what I mean. cant wait for the next chapter (definately dont rush it because this was much better!) James X PS I still think that you could write a crossover with Bond and Potter :) Report Review
n'aw!! YAY Lily and James like each other :) I'm so glad this chapters up now! i loved everything! i'm being serious EVERYTHING. the only thing i'd do to make it that 1% better is split it up into a few more paragrahps, because some people might be put off by the giant chunks of writing. AMAZING. upload more soon please :))Author's Response: New chapter coming soon, with someone very special in it... ;)
Yep, Lily and James. Not sure whether to add any complications in to their relationship, or stick to the Sirius/Maria/Remus/Other people rocky road. Don't want to make it too complicated.
Feel free to email me any ideas :) Report Review
Wow Jesss, your an amazing writter.
Give me your skills :O
xoxoAuthor's Response: Awww, I love you. You leave the nicest reviews.
I don't have and skills to give you bubs, but thanks anyway.
xoxo Report Review
Give me the next chapter now :O I have become addicted to your writing now (:
xoxoAuthor's Response: Thanks so much Beth :) I'll let you know when it's up. xoxo Report Review
Cool chapter, I can't wait for the more interaction with Lily/James!
I actually like Maria, but yet again, I don't like her because she practically stole my Prince Charming at the end of the Chapter! She's an awesome character!
I disagree with you about the ending of the chapter being bad, I loved it!
Great job!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing.
Yes, more Lily/James next chapter. I'll even add in more than I was going to at the end, especially for you because of your lovely review.
The ending was a little rushed, so I wasn't sure about it. Thanks again :) Report Review
Great chapter! I loved the Lily/James interaction in this chapter!
Have an awesome day!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
Yeaah, I love to write about Lily and James.
Have an awesome day too! Report Review
Hey its you know who (no not voldemort!) i know you said you weren't sure about me reading this but i thought i would give it a go, so... i thought it was really amazing, tbh. You manage to get everybody's feeling across really well, i dont think that it sounds that rushed at all it ends juuust right. XAuthor's Response: That made me proper laugh then :)
Ahh, I can't believe you read it :|
Thanks so much though, this is such a nice review. The next chapter is better, i promise. X Report Review
I don't usually leave reviews, but WOW. This is really good. Sirius is a babe - I want him. Keep writing please...Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :) that's so sweet.
I knoww, me too!
I will keep writing, I'm addicted. Report Review
Awww. That's so sweet. I want a guy like that. This is a great story. Keep writing and update soon! :)Author's Response: So do I!
Thanks for taking the time to review.
I will keep writing and the next chapter should be up soon :) Report Review
I love your story!!! I'm french so I'm glad to read about a french witch ^^ continue comme ça! Sincèrement j'adore!
JessAuthor's Response: Merci beaucoup :)
I'm unfortunately not french, but I do absolutely love it there. So that's why I chose for her to be from france.
Thanks again for taking the time to review. The next chapter should be up soon. Report Review
i'm liking it so far. i like your style of writing. can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: Thank you :) it'll be up soon, i promise. Report Review
:) god, your really talented- im green with envy here!! o i wanna no what happens to remus coz if maria doesnt want him hes mine ;)
very good, keep writing, i know you said that u had writers block towards the end, but i felt it was a bit rushed maybe... i dunno!Author's Response: It was rushed, very rushed, I'm going to go back and completely change the ending, but I just wanted to get it up there and validated because I wanted to submit my new song fic.
There's no way you're having Remus, cos he's mine ;) so is James and Sirius.
i will keep writing, I'm too addicted to stop. Report Review
Ok, THis is SO addicting 2 read!Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I'm submitting a new chapter today, so it should be validated in at least a couple of days if you want to read on. Report Review
great plot, setting, and every other thing that my la teacher told me to look for in a good story! this is so easy to believe, very nice!
PS: I didn't say anything about spelling since you said it was 5am. i believe you.Author's Response: Thanks so much.
I just wanted to submit it and go to sleep so I didn't spell check it at all.
I'm so glad you think that, so thanks again. Report Review
nice...and guess what? you CAN spell for tofee.Author's Response: Thanks for reading :)
My laptop doesn't have automatic spell check, so it's a bit annoying. Report Review
n'aww..i'm so glad james and lily are FINALY getting together! oh i see a love triangle type thing coming up :D
its so good, your such a talented writer, for a moment then once i'd read it i wasnt sure whether it was real and i was like i wish i'd done the tryouts, oh well maria would be a better chaser than me anyway.yeh!
ive only got one more thing to say...
WOAHAuthor's Response: Yeah, James and Lily are meant to be. No doubt about it ;D
Thanks so much, that's so sweet. You'd do amazing in tryouts. Report Review
wow that is a million times better than the first chapter and that was good too. you have got real talent 'Violet' :)
J X Report Review
Wow this is amazing, espescially for your first story, you have real talent, keep it up. James
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