For starters.HEY!I love your story. Before I begin I just want to tell you NOT to reply back or tell me to my face ‘NO ITS NOT GOOD, ITS RUBBISH’, coz we all know that’s not true.
I adore the way you write, it’s like I’m reading some unpublished harry potter book! Also you are a very clever writer in the way that you explain everything that needs to be explained. The detail is perfect.
I dislike the fact that you actually spelt covering right! Lol
xxAuthor's Response: Daisy, you are truely amazing.
This made me smile my face off so thanks soo much.
Promise you'll be in the next chapter, I'm going to give you a super hot boyfriend and everything.
I've changed it to third person and resubmitted it as I needed some conversations between the guys and don't like switching the point of view stuff, ya know?
So yeah, thanks so much
You should way submit your story, it's amazing. xxx Report Review
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