Your first review! Congrats on starting this story, I envision it becoming an addicting and interesting experience. Let's dive into the review, that's what I'm here for anyways! :) I think it is interesting that you have called Nymphadora "Dora" instead of Tonks. Tonks is a very strong and confident character, and her insistence on being called by her surname does help the reader grasp her true character. Calling her Dora, from my point of view, takes away from her strength as a character. HOWEVER, i think that it helps to make this story more YOU and I think that every story should have connections to the people that write them. I think this is a wonderful start and you should most definitely keep writing. Good Luck...
p.s. thanks for requesting reviews. If you get the chance, check out my stories here on HPFF and tell me what you think! Thanks again!Author's Response: lusty lover,
You certainly have a point there. For my own personal reasons, I am pulling and revising the piece. The Dora thing. While I agree with you, I thought that I should explain my reasoning a little. I imagined that she and Aiden were close friends. Well, that will become more apparent, although I don't think I'll get that on paper anytime soon. Thank you for the honesty. It's my opinion that in HBP and onward but she and Remus went plain stupid. I never thought she was confident. I guess that's where we differ. Thank you for the review. Report Review
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