Thank God we all know she turns around. I got a litle teary-eyed at the end, and only the comforting thought that James and Lily get together and have Harry or else we wouldn't have had the characters to write the stories about because JKR would've had Harry with different parents made it any better. I hope that made sense.
I can't imagine how he feels, and I hope I never have to feel it myself, but from what I do know, you nailed it.
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I loved it, so sad but soo real. I love pov as well. How in HP they say that James grew up in his last yr at school, his way of thinking shows the maturity and understanding and also realises how important Lily is to him when he is happy to see her happy... well sorta, if you know what I mean. I love the flow of the story and the characters. It worked really well. I loved it. Thanks for the read :)Author's Response: I definitely understand what you mean, and I'm glad that came across! Thanks so much for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
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very well written! Report Review
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