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Review #1, by starwarstina 3... 2... 1...

21st March 2010:
There a lot of little mistakes like "brinbging" and "hermine" and etc. Just watch out for them.

Why did she want Viktor to see her jump? And it's a little confusing that you say he sees her "fall" since really she was trying to commit suicide...

Very interesting. It was really cool. The idea is really cool. I feel like it could be more than just a one-shot though. But I liked it. It was good.

Author's Response: Okay... that was typed at my dad's.. he hasn't got Mirosoft Word, and I had to use Word Pad, and so therefore it didn't red underline my mistakes, and my dads keyboard is like from the '80's I think... So sorry.. but yes, I do believe I WIL make a sequel to it if you like! ^_^ Thanks for the feedback!

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