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Review #1, by Miriel Dear Diary

12th April 2010:
Hey!

I really liked that one, especially how you used the quote from the song. It was a nice idea to reapeat it and add another sentence every time.
I enjoyed reading your story!

Greets
Miriel

Author's Response: Well thanks! I'm glad you liked the quote repeating.

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Review #2, by baletgir Dear Diary

21st March 2010:
Hey! I am really glad you entered my challenge, and I was very excited to see what you did with this song and pairing since I love both. I love the way you reused the same few lines from "Dear Diary" throughout, it kept your story cohesive and interesting. Very well thought out on the plot.
I feel your grammar could use some work. It wasn't overly difficult to read, but there were a handful of glaringly obvious mistakes which I feel need to be caught. Maybe try a beta reader next time, or just a few extra reads.
I liked how this spanned all Hogwarts years. It made it interesting and flowing, yet each section could have used some more detail and just additions.
Overall, good job. I enjoyed the idea and loved how you used the song. It really fit! I hope you enjoyed the challenge and hope you will read the other submissions when they come in!
:) BaletGir

Author's Response: Thanks!
I love Rose/Scorpius too so I'm glad you liked it.
I'll make sure and read through it closer next time.
I'm glad you liked the way I used the song. I wasn't sure if it work.
Thanks for the review and I'll make sure to read the other submissions. It was a good challenge.


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Review #3, by Malfoylover01 Dear Diary

18th March 2010:
i like this one alot it coool xoxoox

Author's Response: Thanks! (:

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Review #4, by amy Dear Diary

18th March 2010:
i think this short story is great

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it!

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Review #5, by RoseParsons Dear Diary

18th March 2010:
love it- great start:)
8/10
Rose:)

Author's Response: Thanks! (:

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