Awesome. Truly awesome. It made me sad and happy and totally fit Sirius/Lily.Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!! :) Report Review
Oh god, this story is just... it's exactly my life right now. But beautiful. Heartachingly so.
I read this as a Sirily, though I had trouble figuring out when it would have happened. Anyway. I'm a huge fan of your writing style, and this was a delight to read, in a tragic sort of way.Author's Response: I can't believe I hit it spot on with this, because seriously, this IS what I'm going through right now :b amazing how things like these can touch so many different people all at once. This is why I love writing, God, if I could touch and affect everyone who ever read my stories, then I would never stop writing! I doubt I will anyways hehe. Thank you so much for your review, I know it's hard, but somehow it'll probably all sort itself out :)
Well, in my head (which works a bit differently from other people's hehe,) Lily and Sirius found eachother at Hogwarts and they fell in love in secret. Sirius done something terrible to Lily and she's talking to him, because she still loves him.
In my head, Sirius would be the guy who had the secrets and he's the player who will break your heart if you're not careful. And he breaks Lily's (my) heart. Whether he ever loved her or not, I can't tell you, because I don't know myself, just as I don't know in my real life.
I like to think he did, though.
Thank you so much for your wonderful review :] Life will work out. It always does. Report Review
I love this! It touched my soul, and I totally related to it. You are such a good writer!Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :) I'm glad you somehow could relate to it :D Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
pretty freaking awesome!! other than a few grammatical errors it was AMAZING! really, really, supermegafoxyawesomehot, good.
well done (:
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Very poetic. It flows wonderfully too. I love it =)Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review :] I'm glad you liked it !! Report Review
I actually really like this. I had to read it twice to really get into it, because the first time I didn't know who it was or anything, and that was kind of strange. But then I finished it and read it again, and I LOVED it.
And I really like that this could seriously be anyone, anywhere. Not just in the whole harry potter thing, but like anywhere ever.
I thought it was really great.
Kristen=]Author's Response: Thank you so much :D I'm glad you liked it ;] Report Review
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