Nice and short chapter, but hope you'll update soon :) Report Review
You need to finish this story :) im only giving you an 8/10 because its not finished yet lol Report Review
This story is really awsome, i almost cried on chapter 11 i think it was when she was left in hogsmead , you do very well. Please update! Report Review
That is really good. Report Review
Please tell me that she becomes Seeker again. I don't think I could live with myself if she didn't. And I don't think I could continue reading this... not that I'm threatening you or anything. This story is brilliant, keep it up. And I can't wait for romance! Report Review
Gr! The relationship between Oliver and Holly is soo annoying. yet i keep reading this... Holly doesn't need to apologize to Wood for anything. I have fallen in love with Holly's character but not until last chapter when Oliver was talking to her when she quit the team. I hate Oliver in this though. He's Mr. Hot & Cold (Katy Perry Ref). You might want to consider doing a Oliver POV to help make him more steady in his character by giving the readers a glimpse at what's going on in his mind and how he's feeling. It's very confusing atm. Report Review
I don't really understand how they could mend their relationship so easily especially when there is so much hurt between them that neither of them seem sorry for. It's not believable and I will totally hate this story if it goes by what you had one of the girls say about how they are the perfect match who hate each other, then be friends then be more than friends. I only feel that way because you made the character synopsis the story within the story, how lame... sorry. I'll keep reading though. I hope it gets better. Report Review
i'm so glad you updated! can't wait til the next chapter. Report Review
ohmigod u r an amazing writer :D keep writing i cn't wait foor the next chapter :)) aaah so excited. I even took my laptop to school so i could read this during lunchtime :0
xoxox Report Review
I hope she goes to his place for Christmas :)
Update soon. Report Review
yes I'm so excited you updated again!!! Report Review
I really hope you dont stop writing this, i really liked this chapter and i hope you continue the story. its going really well! Report Review
there are prettier people in the world. LOL Report Review
gasp... he called her Holly! i gasp alot :P. cant wait for the next chappie
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GASP! BEST CHAPTER EVER! Report Review
Okay well this is wrong. Report Review
Haha, good one with the knee placement. Why the drop out? She can't quit after all her competitveness twords Wood. Not cool, not cool. Report Review
Oh my god. Didshe really just quit the team and knee lucas?! PLEASE update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! Report Review
Whoa whoa whoa. Stop the presses. Holly just said all of that amazing stuff and he STILL walked away?! Oh geeze.
Despite how much i like lucas, i'm really glad oliver punched him. That was a really jerk move there with liz.
And just a qq: how long do you anticipate this story getting? You know, chapter-wise. Report Review
Omg, i absolutely LOVED this chapter! Hahaha, does it make me a bad person if lucas is my favorite character? Everytime he's in a scene i find myself extremely interested in what he's going to do next.
One thing i never understand when it comes to olicer/oc stories, why does oliver always insist on being with some other girl and acting like a total git when the oc shows interest in another guy?! Not that i have a problem with this theme, but its consistency in fanfiction makes me think that oliver wood is a real person that has this unshakeable git-like personality. Report Review
Lol, i really liked the ending lines there. *stupid grin* Report Review
Whoo hoo! Hahah, i dunno why, but i'm grinning like a lunatic over holly's catch. Loved it! Report Review
Hahaha. I couldn't stop laughing at this part:
'He buttoned it up his lean stomach... asdfghjkl' Report Review
Okay. So i'm starting to see the bigger picture here. Holly and oliver were actually friends before the whole question of team captain came up. Interesting. Report Review
Whoa. I didn't think it'd be that easy to convince holly that she likes oliver!
And your take on oliver is so different from any other oliver story out there. For starters, i haven't read a story that involved a CRYING oliver!
Can't wait to see what happens at that party! Report Review
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