{reviewid: 2420958, reviewer: 'Smith'}
6th October 2010:
OMG yaya u used some LATIN!!!
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{reviewid: 2420946, reviewer: 'Kaylyn'}
6th October 2010:
Hey your storys good but all the pass words for the houses are in latin try to use some LATIN !
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{reviewid: 2420801, reviewer: 'AbbeyAndEleanor'}
6th October 2010:
I LOVE your chapter titles. They are possibly the most AWESOME chapter titles I have ever heard. Perhaps you could help me out on my next chapter title. hint hint. And I mean it, A. See you tomorrow.
And the story's goin good, too. A lot less mistakes. I'm proud of you. (Am I allowed to be proud of you xD)
Eleanor xx
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{reviewid: 2420785, reviewer: 'A.keegan'}
6th October 2010:
Instead of writing your story as a sequence of events you should give it a little more substance 'cause, not to be mean or anything, but if you don't give details, feelings and continue with your "chain of events" it's not going to be a catchy story. ;) Good luck
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{reviewid: 2417004, reviewer: 'k'}
26th September 2010:
awesome! cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank u so much, thanks keep on reading!
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{reviewid: 2416631, reviewer: 'magicpuffle'}
26th September 2010:
Hey A... great chapter- squeak squeak squeak lol. see u on monday keep up the good work. finished chapter 1 for our other story
Author's Response: THANK U SO MUCH! THANK U U HAV MADE MY DAY!
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{reviewid: 2410114, reviewer: 'kiss%20the%20rain'}
8th September 2010:
Oh, please keep this up! I think it's really good!
Author's Response: Really Thank You
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{reviewid: 2408247, reviewer: 'PoppiesAndDaisies'}
4th September 2010:
Really good, honey! x Keep going! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks I really enjoy this story and thanks again keep reading
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{reviewid: 2402717, reviewer: 'JilyRonks'}
23rd August 2010:
A M A Z I N G ! : )
I absolutely LOVE it !
JilyRonks ; ) x
Author's Response: Thank you soo much im so pleased you like it read the next chapter when it's up
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{reviewid: 2400109, reviewer: 'AbbeyAndEleanor'}
20th August 2010:
BRILLIANT WRITE MORE QUICKLY PLEASE!
Author's Response: Thank u soo much Please read the next chapter when it's up
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{reviewid: 2396388, reviewer: 'XxX'}
16th August 2010:
What happens next?!?!
Author's Response: ah well you will have to wait and see.
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{reviewid: 2379637, reviewer: 'AbbeyAndEleanor'}
16th July 2010:
THIS IS AS GOOD AS YOUR OTHER STORY! YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITING THIS ONE TOO!
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{reviewid: 2379239, reviewer: 'kitiju'}
15th July 2010:
Ugh, the story is good, but i hate Hermione in the story ( crying all the time ) : o
Hermione screamed and ran to her room and bathed it under cold water - This, i absolutely hate it, but hey, i cant change the story, your ideas, im just saying. But keep it goin' :)
Author's Response: k thank you in next chapter i will change it thanks again please review next chapter when it is validated as i would like to hear your comments :)
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{reviewid: 2360678, reviewer: 'Malfoylover01'}
12th June 2010:
cool start plz update soon xx
Author's Response: i will sorry been busy, the next chapter isnt one of my best but please critism will make the next chapter even better! :)
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