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Review #1, by amy All the Sounds With It

21st April 2010:
a great short story i loved it

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This means a lot to me! :D

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Review #2, by Niki :) All the Sounds With It

18th March 2010:
Holy Junk! This is amazing! I was in the middle of it and then my mom had to do something on the computer and I was like no! I'm at a really good part! I love the way you described everything, like their thoughts, feelings, actions and what not. It made me be able to get a really good mental image of the scene taking place. And good use of copying the way George talks. :) I only have on thing to add. This is just my opinion but I think it would be good if you added more in between each proposal, I think they happen too close together, but like I said that's just my opinion. But other than this story is awesome! :D Good job girl :)

Author's Response: Haha yeah... So I've heard. I just think this is my worst story yet! D:

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Review #3, by ReAnna All the Sounds With It

12th March 2010:
AWWW that was cute i loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you. I tried to get it like that! :D Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #4, by PotterGirl75 All the Sounds With It

10th March 2010:
Great story. There was a minor speed bump with the whole hospital scene. But great job :)

Author's Response: Well thank you. Yes, I admit, that was prolly the hardest scene to write.. :/ But I'm gald you like it! :)

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