Aww, this was such a sweet story! You are a very good writer, and I loved Eleanor and Nathan a lot. Report Review
aw... that was so sweet.Author's Response: Awh, thank you love for the review! I'm glad you liked it!(: Report Review
This was great. I really liked the concept.
But there's a slight problem, it's not exactly readable. It's very confusing. You need to give each dialogue a new line, that way it makes more sense, because if they are all in the same line, it'll seem like one sentence!
Grammatically, all fine. But I suggest you get a Beta! :)
AakankshaAuthor's Response: Oh, thanks for the review! I understand I should get a beta, but I'm so nervous about other people reading my stuff, I barely let my family read it! D: But thanks for enjoying parts of it and for the advice! I'll take it to heart! Thanks love!(: Report Review
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