Reading Reviews for Unexpected Beauty
  
3 Reviews Found
Review #1, by Cavell Masquerade; Painted Faces on Parade
13th February 2012:
Aww, this was such a sweet story! You are a very good writer, and I loved Eleanor and Nathan a lot.

 Report Review
Review #2, by brunettelily Masquerade; Painted Faces on Parade
11th March 2010:
aw... that was so sweet.

Author's Response: Awh, thank you love for the review! I'm glad you liked it!(:

 Report Review
Review #3, by emmapotter Masquerade; Painted Faces on Parade
11th March 2010:
This was great. I really liked the concept.
But there's a slight problem, it's not exactly readable. It's very confusing. You need to give each dialogue a new line, that way it makes more sense, because if they are all in the same line, it'll seem like one sentence!
Grammatically, all fine. But I suggest you get a Beta! :)
love
Aakanksha

Author's Response: Oh, thanks for the review! I understand I should get a beta, but I'm so nervous about other people reading my stuff, I barely let my family read it! D: But thanks for enjoying parts of it and for the advice! I'll take it to heart! Thanks love!(:

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net