I enjoyed it! It wasn't too clichée, not fluffy-duffy-happy, just real. Thank you for writing that! Report Review
this was very good reading Report Review
I liked this one-shot. It is well written, sweet and kind of sad. I am very surprised that Harry would stay so isolated for so long after the battle, I think he would have learned to move on. But that's the beauty of fanfiction, you can explore new possibilites and write what you want without it being right or wrong. I will read the sequel now, if it's as good as this then I'm in for a treat :-) Well done Report Review
Hi Lillian Rose Potter,
I just finished reading Unspoken and I thought it was a great piece. I think you could make this into a multi-part story and I would love to read the expanded version. If you ever expand the story, PLEASE let me know! I think the basic plot of Harry having a difficult time re-entering the Wizarding World after the battle of Hogwarts is a great idea, I like that most of his "torture" is turned in, because it fits his personality so well. I also think that Ginny would be the one to help bring him back.
Thanks for the good read!
~Oh_Skrewt~ Report Review
It was nice. I smiled a lot through it. Report Review
this was soo good! i love that she didnt stop talking to him and stayed by his side even when he wasnt responding.Author's Response: Thank you for reading and i'm so glad you liked it. Report Review
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