It's good, all the chapters, are. My only request is that you could possibly consider making the chapters longer, becuase they are so well written! I really enjoy reading this and look forward to your speedy updating! Wonderful work!

10/10
xD
Natalie

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Update, por favor.

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Good chapter, update soon!
Natalie

Author's Response: Thanks I perticularlly proud of my updating lately and this chapter turned out way good!
Thanks for the review!

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Wow! I definitely didn't expect that I was sure she would get into Gryffindor. Also, are you going to be skipping ahead to a later year or are you writing about all her years or...?
Anyway, great chapter and pleeaase update soon!

Author's Response: Im writing a little about her first year and than it will go to her fifth year when the real story starts! Thanks for the review!
Alayna

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Wow, I'm moved. haha. That was kind of a scary chapter and then BAM it went to happy! haha

Whoops, forgot to intoduce myself :) I'm music_is_inside_of_me and I have decided to read and review you story!

I really love the beginning scene. I mean I don't love the whole killing/torture part but I love your style of writing. I almost cried and I'm not much of a crier haha.

There were a few grammar mistakes but nothing a good proofread couldn't fix. Other then that, I think you have a really good beginning to a potentianally amazing story!

So I am going to continue reading and try to leave more reviews!

Author's Response: Awww Im sorry I didnt mean to make you cry...I promise their wont be any more of the toture too much in the future though. And yeah it could use a good proof read but I have yet to find a beta...maybe next time though...Thanks for the review!

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This was a great chapter! I'm really excited about what will happen when she goes to Hogwarts haha. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I posted a new chapter so check it out! I think you'll be in for a surprise! Thanks for the review!

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Another great chapter, please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens when she starts Hogwarts. Great work.
10/10
Update soon! it was wonderful.
Natalie

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and the review!

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Really good chapter. I cannot wait for more.
Natalie

Author's Response: Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer! And thanks once again for the review...PS: their will be A LOT more to come! =)

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So far so good. It's sad but i really like it and i cannot wait to see where you take it! Wonderful!
natalie

Author's Response: Thanks you Natalie Im glad you reviewed and I cant wait for you to read more! Thanks for the review!

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hmph. way to short. WAY to short. are all of the chapters going to be this short?

Author's Response: Nope that was the shortest chapter I think Im ever going to post peroid, I just had to seperate the two scenes and couldnt think of a better way to do so. Thank for the review!

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i love how her mums name is aimee instead of amy. aimee is so much prettier than amy. you rarely ever see it spelled a-i-m-e-e. thats how my sister spells it. besides the name thing, i can see this blossoming into a very good story.

Author's Response: Yes I love her mums name spelled the way it is...mines diffrent so I tend to lean toward names that are spelled and are diffrent as well! Thanks for the review!

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