Riddle would obviously be very interested in Flamel because of his craving for power, so nice job there. Maybe SS/PS isn't the first time he tried to steal the sorcerers stone.

Author's Response: Hmmm maybe you're right!!! *shifty* We'll just have to see huh??? :P
~~Chelsea

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I loved it! It was the perfect first chapter. I can't wait to see what Riddle turns out like with Nicholas as his teacher. I actually thought you were talking about because he's an orphan, but I realised that he died before Dumbledore considered Slughorn the second time. Anyway this is great!

Author's Response: Thank You!!! Yes, things shoudl get veryyy interesting in the next chapters!!!

Glad you liked it!
~~Chelsea

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Oh wow the second chapter is up already!
This was wonderful; I love your writing style. The characters are done beautifully. Also, your writing is pleasently error-free (at least as far as I can see).
It's so great to read writing that flows this well!
I also just wanted to say that I really like Nicolas' character. He's old, but still mischievous. I can tell that him being a teacher is going to be interesting to read about.
I also liked Riddle's reaction to Nicolas' arrival, as well as the fact that Dumbledore was watching him.
The suspense is killing me; I can't wait for more!

-AKABARA

Author's Response: Yes, queue time is blessedly short lately! I am so glad you like the characters! I havent really written any of them before, so I am glad they are working out! *celebrates*

Yes, Nicolas is an interesting feller :D We didnt get much of a picture of him in canon, and I couldnt picture him as just being a placid soul.

I am so glad you like it so far!!! I will try to get the next up ASAP! thanks!
~~Chelsea

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Thanks so much for participating in my challenge.
Okay, one thing at the beginning, you said: "This story was written by Akabara's Dispelled Romour Challenge!" I think you meant to say "This story was written for Akabara's Dispelled Rumor Challenge!" Just a tip. :3
Okay, now on to your wondrous beginning! I LOVED the interaction between Dumbledore and Nicolas. They had a very nice dynamic that I think was very canon and enjoyable.
This was a great introduction and it foreshadows a lot, especially because we all know what happened to the young Tom Riddle.
I can't wait to read the rest of the story!

-AKABARA

Author's Response: Okay wow, was I asleep when I submitted it? lol That's embarassing *dies*

ANYWAYS, xD I am glad you liked it, even though it was short. Yes, foreshadowing is a forerunner here.

This has been really fun to write so far, and I cant wait to see what you think as it progresses!
~~Chelsea

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