Great Chapter. Its nice that you skipped forward I was wondering about how a story would work centred around a load of kids.
I like how you write, it's very descriptive without going overboard.
Am I allowed to know what happened to Penelope? Pretty please?
Keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you so much, you've very sweet. (:
Penelope's story will be revealed soon, I promise! Report Review
Wow I like it.
How the tables have turned.
I like that you're not shying away from making things a bit dark.
Just a quick question, how are the families related to cannon? The Carrows, Lestranges and Greybacks.
Was Meara married to Fenrir or sister/other relative?
Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review!
Dorian Carrow is actually the son of Amycus, and Meara is one of Fenrir's many children. Alexander is Bellatrix and Rudolphus' son, and Octobre is the son of Rabastan. They're all a little older than Draco, but still within the same generation. Hopefully that cleared up some confusion.
And I'm working on the next part as we speak! (: Report Review
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