Reading Reviews for Ariana
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by lifyndra The moon is rising.

27th March 2010:
Hmm... this story is so lovely... familiar somehow, heehee.

I'm so happy to see that you've gotten so many glowing reviews! Your Ariana really is wonderful, hon. :D

Author's Response: Aah, my wonderful beta...THANKS SO MUCH! :)

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Review #2, by Miss Lily Potter The moon is rising.

14th March 2010:
I loved this. (: Ariana's voice was so... peaceful, so melancholy, so haunting. I adored reading it. (: This is really a wonderful story, and so sad, especially how she calls attention to the fact that they both feel guilt, and that they both think they killed her, but they all did. Gah. Wonderful job.

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Review #3, by harry4eva The moon is rising.

6th March 2010:
I absolutely love your story!

Author's Response: Thankyou :)

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Review #4, by HarrietHopkirk The moon is rising.

6th March 2010:
I truly adore this. It is so poetic and really, really beautifully written. It is so hard to believe that this is only your third story. You get so much across in just 700 it is amazing. Write more please. Why don't you tr a short story or a novella?

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Review #5, by redherring The moon is rising.

5th March 2010:
I LOVED this! Your Ariana was great - she was so sweet and sad and lonely, and I really liked the wisdom she showed there at the end. Your writing was wonderful as well, especially the description. Brilliant! :)

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