Reading Reviews for I Am My Mother's Only One
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Review #1, by BitterSweetFlames I Am My Mother's Only One

4th April 2010:
omg.. yay!
That was so Luna..
Like, seriously.. I loved how you wrote her.. It was definitely short
but it was sweet...

I can imagine her so very vividly and to me, that's definitely talent..

Keep writing! :)


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Review #2, by krazeea I Am My Mother's Only One

17th March 2010:
that was absolutely spectacular! you captured Luna's character so well, I really did feel like I was right there in her mind :) keep up the great work, I will have to read through these once I finish this stupid vid lmao.
- alice

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Review #3, by krazeea I Am My Mother's Only One

17th March 2010:

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Review #4, by Lil lily71 I Am My Mother's Only One

6th March 2010:
Ayesha, this was short but utterly wonderful, you Luna was in her element. Very well written, she is such a darling character, the last lines were my favorite:

'I no longer have time for them because that speck of dirt is dancing away to my right and I have to follow it. Without a backwards glance, I softly bid them goodbye and walk after this dot of dirt, hoping that it'll lead me to some elusive truth.'

beautiful work darling *squishes* 10/10


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Review #5, by Drecklin I Am My Mother's Only One

4th March 2010:
Ayesha you write so beautifully its amazing to me how it all works together. But you pull it off flawlessly, the carefree feeling and yet the feeling of something so much deeper all in this one one-shot. It's simply amazing! I felt like a breeze reading this, which sounds so weird but its true. Its so light and airy and I love it. You definitely did Luna justice and it truly was a pleasure to read this :) Keep it up love!



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