I stumbled across this and couldn't leave without reviewing. This was beautiful, really truly. Short and sweet and so wonderful. The tone of this was gentle and soft and so full of love. Thank you for writing this, because I was so swept away with this. It was honestly so lovely,
Laura xAuthor's Response: Hey dearie!
You are more than welcome! I had fun writing this, mostly because I was in a very whimsy mood and thought to use it to my advantage. I'll admit, I thought it was a bit too flowery in places, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and sorry it's taken me so long to get this response up! Report Review
I'm glad I found this story -- it's so realistically written, it was very moving. This is such a lovely passage: "Sometimes, he feels like he imagines her, in all her perfect imperfections: the spattering of odd freckles along her neck, the scar bisecting her left eyebrow, the knobbiness of her knees." I really hope there's some sort of a future for these two, somewhere out there, because Oliver's unrequited crush has me feeling so much sympathy for him. Lovely job!Author's Response: Whoa, thank you! I was not expecting this review, let alone one of such a complimentary magnitude. I'm just - speechless, really.
I'm so happy you liked it. I've always loved the idea of Katie/Oliver, so this is the product of that.
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*whistles* Now that's a story I love coming back for! :)
So I'm going to copy this into a Word document and save it under "Admirable Works" just so you're aware. It's the stuff I look at when I'm feeling particularly low--sometimes it's torture to look at the Bigger and Better Deal, and other times it inspires me to write. A mixed bag, as it were.
Lovely one-shot. ^_^ I missed your wonderful stories.
-BeautyLoonyKeeper Report Review
You know what this one-shot reminds me of? It reminds me of Rin's writing. Beautiful, evocative, ethereal imagery. I loff it.
Katie Bell is divine. But who is the boy? The lack of color thing made me immediately think of Draco, for some reason, but otherwise I have no clue. Katie/MysteryMan. Excellent ship. XD
MelanieAuthor's Response: MELANIE!
Oh my crumbs, it reminds you of Rin's writing? You must be delusional; I could never even dream of writing half as well as she does. However, the compliment is appreciated, even if I don't necessarily feel like it's deserved.
Oh, Draco is actually a good guess, but it's not him. It's actually Oliver Wood. Or at least, that's who I had in mind when I wrote it. As you've just proved, it can be an open interpretation.
I'm so happy you liked it!
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this is such a perfect story! between the descriptions and the imagery i near about peed my pants it was that good! i really love how you used the length of the story too, so often in short stories authors either don't answer enough to your curiosity or they use the whole space to tell secrets and answers! this was the best semi-fluff story i've read! Report Review
That was just lovely, dear. Really, it was very sweet! I love anything of yours I read, your narration and descriptions are just divine, the paint such a lovely picture as I read.
Simply put, this was a lovely little, piece of a moment in their lives. Little moments like these are always more of my favourite then big monumental things can be.
ColletteAuthor's Response: Aw, Collette, thank you so much for your review! It was beautiful and stunning, just like you! *squish* Report Review
Short but cute;)
You know you could turn this into a long
Story- it would make a very good introduction & it has the potential. You are obviously a very good writer too.
I enjoyed it
9/10 & added to favorite storys;) Report Review
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