okay, this was really good. the language was absolutely beautiful! and written in an hour or so? that's incredible! but seriously, this was beautiful and it's going on my favorites list.Author's Response: Oh, thank you!
This is old, OLD. Like, back when I would write things in an hour and just post 'em up. :P
But thanks for your lovely review! I appreciate it. Report Review
I'm so very sorry that I didn't review this sooner, love! When you sent me an inbox with this silly, but honorable dedication, I meant to read it, but things got busy and this pushed back. :(
Anyway. How do you do it Rin? How? I envy you greatly for whipping up stories in an evening, when it can take me AGES. But I love the tension between Victorie and Teddy on each end of the door, both wanting to open, but neither having the guts to. Until the very end of course. It showed how they cared for each other and wanting to kiss the other on the lips.
I love it dear. I really do! And thanks! ♥Author's Response: Haha, Alicia, I'm still having trouble recognizing you with your new username!
And thank you for the review! I really appreciate the effort. With no feedback before you, it was hard to tell how people were liking the story. I'm glad to know it has at least one admirer. :)
Thanks again, dear! I'm glad you liked the very story that was dedicated to you. Report Review
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