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Review #1, by confusedlover Chapter One: The Meeting, Calling, What-the-heck-ever

29th May 2010:
very lovely.

i have loved this pairing for so long now it is great to see that there are a few stories blooming about them. i can't wait to see where you take this. keep up the fantastic work and have a very fun and exciting day!

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Review #2, by SuperMegaFoxyAwesomeHot Chapter One: The Meeting, Calling, What-the-heck-ever

6th March 2010:
Haha, well, you certainly have a unique style and voice, which is definitely a good thing. :)

I must say, I have never even considered Blaise and Luna as a couple, so let's see if you can make them believable. You've got a challenge ahead of you, but I bet you can pull it off.

Perhaps you could make the future chapters longer? I was caught up in reading, and then, BAM, it's over before it's even really begun. :(

Also, is the "8:57 A.M., Charms class" thing under the chapter description something that will be an ongoing update? It's interesting, for sure, but it seems kind of random, haha.

Anyway, interesting start, nice use of figurative language, and I'm intrigued to see who the narrator is. Keep up the good work! :)

P.S. Congratulations on your first HPFF story!! How exciting for you! You've done a nice job so far. :D

Author's Response: nice name xD
and thank you for reading and reviewing...
yeh this Blaise and Luna thing is/was pretty new to me. I have read a couple of stories with them, and I thought they might seem kind of cute together yeh know?
I can definitely make the chapters longer if you want. It just might mean less chapters but who cares about the number of chapters right? It's quality not quantity! lol
thank you again!


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