Great story,but I really think
"Personal Jesus" by Depeche Mode would have been a better song choice,since Hermione desperately wants to "reach out and touch faith". Report Review
This would be a GREAT way to revive the TV soap opera, tying it in with something like HARRY POTTER or TWILIGHT. Both of these stories already have soap element in them,so all you have to do is amp them up several hundred degrees. Report Review
I'm liking the story , Its very well written. But I have to say the song lyrics in between the lines is incredibly annoying . Thats why I'm rating it 5/10 Report Review
fab i do like that song anyway so great way to use it!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Report Review
I HATE RON!!! HE'S AN EVIL S**T (I don't think you can swear in reviews)! Poor Draco but if only he had listened!!! Hermione doesn't deserve this!Author's Response: Haha, you got that right! We'll see how it pans out then, shall we? :D Report Review
pls dnt keep dis hangin lyk dis.
i'll b bitin my nails...;)Author's Response: I'll try, thank you so much! Report Review
omg that was so funny, it has to be the best break up chapter i have ever read.:)Author's Response: Wow, thank you, what a compliment! Glad you liked it! Report Review
Please can someone kick Ron's butt good. Starting w/Lavender. LOLAuthor's Response: Agreed! Haha, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
plz let ron still fight for her but let Draco forgive hermioneAuthor's Response: Really? Does he deserve forgiveness? Well, I'll see what I can do! Thanks x Report Review
NOOO! They're dead! Ahem, I mean their relationship. Get them back together...or else...
1000/10Author's Response: Don't worry, I have it all planned out - you are my best reviewer, so I thank you! Report Review
Amazing chapter anyway, just a question, what Disney song?
9/10Author's Response: "I Won't Say I'm In Love" from Hercules - so fitting, it was a shame they wouldn't allow it. Thanks again! Report Review
Is it love? OF COURSE IT'S LOVE! AMAZING! I LOVED IT! GOING TO READ MORE RIGHT NOW!!!
GYMNAST23Author's Response: Honestly!? OMG, THANK YOU!! Report Review
I love how you had the moods switch around, one minute it's all angsty, then sad and dramatic, than a little bit of humor at the end. AMAZING!
1000/10Author's Response: Thanks once more, you're amazing! Report Review
LOL, amazing! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
1000/10Author's Response: Wow, I cannot believe you! Haha! Report Review
It was amazing what are you talking about?! I LOVED it!!! I can't wait to see Draco, what's going to happen? This story is so dramatically written, I LOVE IT!Author's Response: Thanks again, you're the best! Report Review
Super dramatic! I love how you wrote it, with all the tension and everything. The song choice was great too, I really loved this story.
P.S. I would leave a longer review, but there aren't words in this world good enough to describe this story.Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much, you've no idea how much those words meant to me! I'll be writing the next as soon as possible, you're amazing! Report Review
Amazing, truely, I need more :)Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I'm glad you like it! I have a new one-shot coming your way, but after, I will indeed write the next chapter of this! Thanks again! Report Review
Frankly, I prefer no song. Im not really into songfic. Your story ROCKS though.Author's Response: Cool! I'm glad you like the story, that's most important! Thanks for the review! :D Report Review
i liked it too i liked reading there walk in the parkAuthor's Response: Yeah, that was fun to write! Report Review
i am enjoying your storyAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
i.scream.dracoAuthor's Response: Thanks a lot!! Report Review
That last part was evil, just leaving her there. What kind of man is he? Surely not a gentlemen. But anyway, loved it and the fact that he realices they are meant for each other. :D Can't wait til' the next chapter.Author's Response: Thanks! Totally understand where you're coming from with Draco, but he's confused, I mean, he shouldn't really like her, should he? Thanks for the review! Report Review
hmm, i would have built up more chemistry before the first kiss, but great all the same ^^Author's Response: Yeah, but it's just the way this panned out. Plus, Draco doesn't know what to do about it yet! Report Review
hmm i can tell I'll be quickly reading these through, (they're quite good!) So hurry and make the 6th Chapter ^^ rofl.Author's Response: Will do, hanks for reviewing! Report Review
Though it is sort of weary when you know the song and and read the story and then here the choir from this song in your mind as you read, haha, it looks like it'll be a great story!
9/10Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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