Good first chapter! You had a few punctuation typos, but your story really pulled me in! Great job! :) Report Review
sad storyy :( Well am a sucker for sad storyes so hope to read more :) Report Review
i have enjoyed your first chapter Report Review
I could feel the tears burning just behind my eyes at those last few lines. It's not cliché in the least, in fact it's unique to find somebody dealing with such a issue. I have a personal connection to this issue in particular and so I'm definitely going to follow the story, I think you handled the first chapter brilliantly. spam_up_sam Report Review
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