Please, you've got to finish this story! It sounds like it has so much potential to be another great story like the octane trilogy-that-doesn't-have-a-third-part-yet. *subtle glare and nudge in the ribs* Report Review
Whoa. Just... whoa.
This is intense, scary goodness at its best. Report Review
hey love this anmy more coming up soon? Report Review
PLEASE update soon. I'm loving this! Report Review
Hey. I really like this story you need to keep it coming. Ireally like the octane series too I can't wait for the next chapter to b posted
Keepp it coming Report Review
I just want to say, I love your writing, its not light and fluffy like most Authors writing fan fictions, its intense and its gripping and I love it.
Just wow. Big wow. Your story lines aren't just about teenage hormones and little cat fights, your plot is big and its intricate - with 'The Octane Generation' too. And this makes your stories so thrilling to read. Seriously every time I saw an update for The Octane Generation, I'd drop everything and read it because I was so captivated by the story. I have a feeling this one will be totally awesome too, and even possibly better. It seems a lot darker too, and I'm liking it ;) (surprising, I don't normally read/like dark stories...)
Its only the second chapter and already the plot thickens, I love the action, the life threatening situations and the danger your characters have to go through. Seriously if this (or The Octane Generation) was a printed novel I'd pay good money to be reading it.
I love the intensity and fast paced action, keep it up :D
Awesome, Just awesome
ps. If you do end up becoming a writer, contact me - I definitely want to read your stuff :) Report Review
Something tells me that there will be an incident involving Selwynn during his training, maybe a shift in personality. That could help cause the nightmares Rowena Ravenclaw has. Report Review
This is kind of cool. I especially like the end, like it was really the most obvious answer. Report Review
Wow. Must say I'm impressed all over again. I was hooked on Octane Generation as soon as I read the first line when it was first published and this is just as good. :) I can't wait to keep reading this. It seems so well thought out and very, sort of realistic.Author's Response: Great! I'm glad you like it. This one will be alot darker and more brutal than The Octane Generation tho.
Thanks for the review. :D Report Review
wow!! haha you really love to start off stories with a bang, don't you :]
well i just finished reading your last story - my new favorite - and casually stumbled across this gem on your author's page, and im absolutely in love with it! first chapters are usually dull and filler-like, but yours really gets the story going at a pace i can live with :]
and yay for a paradox!Author's Response: Hehe, getting a review from someone called 'timelady' for a story about time-travel is brilliant! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. The second is on the way. :)
Wow! This is really good!
~MarciaAuthor's Response: Thank you. :D Report Review
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