i love this story and i hope you can update soonAuthor's Response: :D Thank you for reading.I will try to update soon, but I am in Year 12 and currently have alot going on so can't make any promises. I will, however endeavour to update as soon as I can. Report Review
I like chapters that are this long. Originally I was hesitant to read this but I like this story so far. Great jobAuthor's Response: Thanks for reading, i'm glad you liked it. Another chapter won;t be up for a couple of weeks though because unfortunately i have VCE exams at the moment, I shouldn't really even be on the computer now! Report Review
so far, i really like it! i think ginny's personality is perfect. keep it coming!Author's Response: Thank you, i probably won't update again until the end of my exams because i';m in year 12, but there will definitely be more :D Report Review
Wow! Just like Ginny to disobey Snape and the Carrows like that! Awesome story!Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! I hope you continue to like it XD Report Review
I liked this chapter, ;D.
It was short, but detailed & held my curiosity. :)
Videoart? XDAuthor's Response: :D Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
I really like this. Canon based stuff is the best!Author's Response: :D Thanks for your review XDXDXDXDXD, I happen to like both, but i do love this story XDXDXDXD Report Review
ohh! this chapter is sweet! i think snape just seems really mean, so he won't seem like 'week' or anything. but he's acually really nice.Author's Response: I completely agree that he dose have his students interests at heart, though i do believe that his behavior towards Harry and dislike of Gryffindors might be partially true, thanks to the Marauders. Report Review
At last, a new chapter! :-) Great work, you write Snape really well. It's good to see things from a different POV! Well done, it was very good; I was starting to think you had forgotten this story, I'm glad you haven't! Please update soon!Author's Response: Sorry about that.i had exams, and i was trying to get another story up...i should have another chapter up for validation in a week or so XD
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Update soon please! Pretty please?Author's Response: yeah sure, my beta and i have exams at the moment, but will be updating asap XD
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Really fab story...
V.GoodAuthor's Response: Thanks for your kind review, I'm glad you like it Report Review
Although quite short, still a very good chapter. It was clever how you included the trophy room and Harry and Ron's awards from their second year. Keep it up :-)Author's Response: I know it was a little short, but if found this chapter kind to hard to write, by the way in the reply about warnings, by next chapter, i meant two chapters from now, sorry. Thank you for reviewing so much XDXDXDXDXD Report Review
Your best chapter so far. I like the way you showed how dumb Amycus is by having him call it the "crucio curse". My only criticism would be, when Amycus attacks Ginny, I would have thought one of her friends would have tried to help her. But still, very good, and improving every chapter. Keep it up :-)Author's Response: Hmm...thanks for your criticism. When I was writing I kind of forgot about that. I could say that they were a bit shocked but that really isn't a good excuse.if I do any other scene like this I will definitely take that into account XD
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I think you've got Ginny's personality pretty much spot on, I notice she hasn't been thinking much about Harry yet, or talked to Luna, but it's still early days :-) I look forward to the next chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks for picking up on that, the next chapter will address some of that, i will be sure to include more of the rest in the future XDXDXDXDXDXD Thank you for liking Ginny Report Review
Quite a good chapter, I can't wait for the second! :-) I've always been interested in the storyline of what happened to everyone in the year Harry was on the run, so I'm glad you've decided to write about it. I look forward to reading more.Author's Response: Thanks for your review XDXDXDXD Report Review
It flows alot better than other stories ive read. shall go on and read the next chapter :)Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and giving me a chance, I hope you like it XD Report Review
So far I really like this fan fiction, I think it great someone doing a fan fiction that take place during the seventh book that give a idea of what life was like for the student at Hogwart. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review, I really wanted to do a fic like this and am ecstatic that people like it, the next chapter should be up soon Report Review
I liked it, the flow is a little awkward but not that bad. You also are EXTREMELY good at writing in the character's voices. Please keep writing.
P.S. I've only read the first chapter. LolAuthor's Response: AWWW Thank you, you make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside with that compliment.
I will keep writing, I just ask one thing of you, keep reading (and if you can, reviewing because they make my day) Report Review
This was a good chapter; I liked the fact Professor McGonagall had a one to one converstaion with Ginny. And yes, I think Ginny's personality is fairly accurate, but then again this is fanfiction, and you can do whatever you want with personalities!Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing reviews make my day and give me inspiration to keep writing so thank you
I'm glad to know you liked the one-on-one with Professor McGonagall and that you think my portrayal is accurate. Report Review
Why are you doubting this chapter so much? I really liked it; its the perfect beginning for a story like this, and I'm excited about reading the rest.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :D, I don't really know why I didn't like it that much at the time of writing, I think i thought it flowed a bit awkwardly. I hope the rest of my story lives up to what you expect :) Report Review
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