Wow, this is simply incredible. Words can't describe how much I loved this. I can't even believe it has no reviews, because it's amazing. Every part of this was genius.
I love the way you write. The words were so simple. You didn't have huge, fancy words that make you sound like you're a walking thesaurus. But the words together made some of the prettiest sentences I've ever read. I'm in awe of it.
The emotion in it, the raw emotion, was gorgeous. It showed that not every death story had to be brimming with angst. This was sad, depressing even, but not dramatic. You acheived the perfect balance.
I'm still in awe of your skills here. You are cleary one of the best authors on the site, and it makes me sad that this story went unnoticed. Great job, hun!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw Report Review
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