hey great story i really enjoyed itAuthor's Response: Thanks!!! :D Report Review
Hi, hi, hi!! XD
Dude, I freaking love your story! It is so good and unique. :)
Your OCs are awesome, especially Andy (since we haven't heard much from Penelope yet). By the way, I love how you made Penelope plump and not traditionally pretty, though I think she she seems cute. It's refreshing to have an OC who isn't described as drop-dead-gorgeous.
Your story was highly entertaining, witty, and, might I add, I love your banner! Did you make it? Annnd, I like the title of your story.
The only thing I could possibly suggest you improve on would be that sometimes, the way you jump from character to character is a wee bit confusing and fast, but you seem to make it work for you.
All in all, you managed to captivate my attention from start to finish, which is saying something, since I usually take random breaks when I'm reading fanfictions to check out other things.
Keep up the fabulous work! I will definitely be favoriting this story. Please update soon and make your next posts longer. :DAuthor's Response: HI! :D
Hahah thanks! Yes, I too am quite fond of my OCs lol.
Thanks again, and yes I did make it myself. I just thought, hey i could either request to have someone else make it for me or put my major to a use and make it myself, and then I chose the less lazy route (which is rare but not when it comes to graphics) :P. The title was actually the first thing that came to my head after I wrote this chapter and was like, oh hey I need a title, I wasn't too sure about it but I'm glad you like it cause I don't think I could come with anything better. :)
I'll try and work on my character jumping, this is my first story that I plan on having more than one main point of view so it'll take some work. But I'm happy you don't think it's not total rubbish.
Finally, I am very happy that it was able to keep your attention, lol, and thanks for both favoriting it and reviewing! I'm still trying to work the kinks of chapter 2 but it shouldn't be too much longer :D Report Review
Hello :) This is a nice start to what sounds like will be a rather interesting story. Andria sounds like a bit like me- forgetful hehe. Good opening chapter and look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work :)
-wytchkittyAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you like it! I too happen to be forgetful, not as bad as Andy but still... thus the lateness to this reply. :P Report Review
Great! I can't wait to read the next chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it so far :D Report Review
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