I loved this a lot. I thought that the character of Bellatrix was pretty close to my interpretation of her, and it really made me feel for the girls father. I thought the newspaper article was well written and the way you wrote 'She would kill tonight. And the next night. And the night after that. And every night that she possibly could until age finally erased her from the world and she entered oblivion.' Was quite powerful and showed how much Bellatrix was set on killing. Really well done! ^_^
EmzaAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!
Yay first review for this story! I'm glad you thought that Bellatrix was done at least somewhat right. That's a relief! :3
I was really vying for sympathy for the OC's, so I'm glad you felt for the poor guy.
I'm also glad that you liked that line. It took me a while to write it, but it was worth it!
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