I like the fact that you admit you don't believe in something. Honesty is a virtue.
The grammar and spelling could improve a bit.
Not meaning to brag, but people say I'm the cleverest in my school.
And as for typical British weather, right now ( 12:18pm ) it's windy, and the tree outside my window is going haywire.Author's Response: oh i believe in Angels, its just Sirius that doesn't
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Love it. I really can't believe that this has only gotten 3 reviews so far. The angst was really well done; there was enough to make it seem real, something that is really difficult to do. Fantabulous work!Author's Response: :D thanks so much. It was my first one-shot. (it feels so long ago).
you review has made me feel happy, and its like a pre-Christmas present. thanks :D
And I'm glad you like it :D Report Review
It's very touching, and the description is good enough to visualize without being over the top. The only problem I had with it was Sirius leaving Baby Harry before anyone else could show up. Other than that, a very good piece.Author's Response: suppose, but one would never understand anything that goes through a grieving mind Report Review
Ok I have this issue when I read sad stories. if someone dies i cry. I cried through the whole seventh hp book. And i avoided reading you story for weeks. but I made myself read it and guess what. I cried! But I think it was really good!Author's Response: Same i cried a lot through the last two books, but thanks for reading the story. I have cried at a few fan fics too. Report Review
Umm...I would of liked to see a bit more reaction when he came upon the dead James, it felt like 'ok, he's dead' and he moved him aside. You could have him scream in anguish or yell his head off. Also, why did he put Harry back into the cot? and leave him in the same room as his dead mother? That's a bit odd.
But I liked the interpretation of the Angels crying when it's raining, that was a really nice touch.Author's Response: I think it was because Sirius knew what to expect, and that he is a person who doesn't like to really show his emotions. Also I think that he knew the someone would be there in a few moments, ie Dumbledore and that he couldn't keep his hard outer exterior on for much longer and that also he wasn't thinking strait either. I don't know i just wrote it on an off hand chance that it might be good Report Review
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