heheheee wow!!! i think this story is gonna be a fab! dramione rockz,
shinichi

Author's Response: thank you and dramione do rock :)

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So shape is still alive...good I liked his character ...oh and this chapter was good too

Author's Response: everyone love draco lol and thank you

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This chapter was quite funny...by the way I really like your title...very original

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This chapter was quite funny...by the way I really like your title...very original

Author's Response: it seemed the best title for the chapter

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Wow they really seem to hate one another...must read on...

Author's Response: or do they lol

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Hi. This is a really good story. I like the idea and it is a super plot. It's great how you keep building the tension and suspense, but I have one plea. Please, please, please, please, please, please, please enough with the spelling and grammar mistakes!! I'm not meaning this in a bad way at all but you may get HEAPS more reviews and reads. Whenever you have finished writing a chapter leave it for an hour and then go back and check a couple of times for any spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes or missed out words.
I do not mean this in a mean way at all, I'm just pointing this out in a friendly way to help you become an even better author:)
Goodbye and good luck!!
BS:)

Author's Response: thank you and thank for the advice i know my spelling and grammar aint that good but im working on it

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My guess is Malfoy loves hermioney... i love your work btw, keep it up

Author's Response: oh no that not the secret and thank you :)

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hey hun I actually like this its funny and sweet and dramatic its a great story all together keep it coming

Author's Response: thank u 4 ur review and will do might take some time though cause i've got college and that but try and update soon :)

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ahahha love dis story hope u carry on writing :D

Author's Response: thank you and i will just have 2 wait 4 my bata 2 finish edting it be up soon :P x

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Write more! these were some great chapters I LOVED THEM

Author's Response: thank you so much and will do but I've got 2 put the other chapter 4 my other story first :P :P xx

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omg omg omg i just finished your story soo fucking funny luv it

Author's Response: thank you it get funnier :P :P xx

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HAHA Love this chapter is so hilarious!!!
Now they can't hidew anything from each other and shes the one who caused it and not him!!
Can't wait for the next chapter to be in!
Keep Updating!

Author's Response: thank u for the review and yes it was her fault but she never admit it and will do :P :P xx

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ha lol, love the last bit. and i'm sure draco would get some sort of kick out of it.

Author's Response: yea he will but the so downs for him 2 you just have 2 wait 4 the next chapter :P :P

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Thank you for crediting me, I deserved it :D! And I will beta, you only have to send me what you want editing :)
Good chapter by the way!

Author's Response: hanks sam will do :P :P

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Love how they have a food fight
Keep Updating

Author's Response: thanks and will do :P :P xx

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Ah ha ha ha. ;D
Awesome.
I especially loved the title of the story, which was what caught my eye. ^_~

Author's Response: thank u 4 reviewing and i though this title would be cool :P :P x

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Hey, I saw that you are in need of a beta, and I'd be willing to help you out. You can email me any chapters you want edited, and I'll do my best :) My email is:
mizurio33@gmail(dot)com
Hope to hear from you
Cheers,

~autumn

Author's Response: thanks that will be great i email u soon with the next chapter and thank again 4 helping xoxxo

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Oh my god u really need 2 sort out ur grammer, no offense but it is TERRIBLE u need 2 get a beta (not me). Other than that is still good I love it. 1 question tho: y do u n chloe like 2 make Draco EXTREMELY self-centred? I almost have 2 ask myself y I love him. Almost - I'm not stupid

Author's Response: i don't know how 2 get a bate but i find out soon and because that what draco is i love him but that what makes draco DRACO lol xxx

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I liked it! Keep going with the story, It's getting better!

Author's Response: will do and thanks again for reviewing xxx

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I also wanted to add that you did a great job at keeping the characters in CHARACTER. The things that happened seems like something they would do.

Author's Response: thank i found the first chapter but this make me happy that i doing a good job :P xx

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I didn't understand half of that, but I like the premise. So you should keep on going but with better grammar.

Author's Response: sorry i not very good with my grammer and spelling but i'm getting a bate so hope u keep reading thank 4 review xx

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Please update ASAP, i love this story so much, makes me lol. :D

Author's Response: thank this review made me happy and i update soon x

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Dear Lauren,
This is a promising start, so much fun to read! :)
The argument was well-written and interesting to read from Hermione's POV.
Hugs xxx

Author's Response: thank you that mean alot the next chapter should be up soon xx

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post the next chapter soon.you are a very talented writer

Author's Response: thank u for thank lovely review and the next chapter will be on very soon xxx

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Hey! I wanted to say I really like the story and thought I might make a suggestion for you. I read some of your reviews and I noticed people made a lot of comments about your grammar and spelling. I think it's such a shame that people won't read your story because of those mistakes so what I wanted to say is why don't you request a beta reader for your story? They can help you with your grammar and spell check as well as plot and character development if you need it. You can request one at the Harry Potter Forum the link is in the top right hand corner on every page if you don't know.
Like I said I think it's a shame if people don't read your story because of the mistakes. Good luck,
RainbowVeins

Author's Response: thanks for the advice and will try and sort it out and thanks for the lovely review x

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