Wonderfully written! I love Neville and Luna stories that are grammatically correct with minimal spelling errors. Also, it was just a beautiful story. =] Report Review
*tears up* I lurved it!Author's Response: I'm thrilled :D Report Review
This was amazing! I really enjoyed it...are you going to write anymore? Report Review
A cute little story here. Interesting that you took it entirely from Neville's PoV. A little of Luna's might have worked too. All in all, not bad.Author's Response: Thank you :) I just wanted a little glimpse into Neville and to keep it nice and simple. Report Review
Ahh, I can always go for a good Neville/Luna fic, even though I'm overly Canon-tastic most of the time. And this was really cute. I like the small detail of Neville not getting the name of the Blibbering Humdingers right, right near the beginning, you know. I liked this story lots. Good job! Report Review
Aww, this was really cute! I love Luna and Neville. I think you captured their personalities perfectly. 10/10Author's Response: Thanks for yet another lovely and uplifting review! I'm so glad you thought the characterisation was on point... they are so not easy to do XD Report Review
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