This story only has one review? Where are all the Rita Skeeter haters to relish this moment? :P

In all seriousness, this was a terrifying story. It left more questions clinging than it answered but it was so wonderfully mastered that I just can't be mad. Who was the man? Who had been his wife? Exactly what part did Rita play in her death?

I have barely read three stories of yours and yet I am already addicted to your style. Death seems to be a recurring theme but it's always handled with so much skill, so much eloquence it's a pleasure to read about it.

This time it was Rita's turn. I can't say I was displeased even though it felt a bit chilling. He poisoned her? She resembles her twin self from the books to perfection and I am yet again swept off my feet by your skill of keeping characters in character even in difficult moments like their time of death. Fantastic job! I shall soon run out of words to praise you :D


House Cup 2011, End of an Era Review Extravaganza
Forum name: Debra20
House: Gryffindor

Author's Response: Wow, you're reviews are absolutely amazing. Thank you so, so much! I don't even have words to respond to this review- it was that good. You really make me feel quite amazing and I appreciate it so much!

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Hm. Well, overall, I think this is rather good. I like the concept of it. If you don't mind, I'd love to suggest some things. Firstly, before you post something, I'd suggest proofreading it. If not you, then have someone read it over for you. There were some simple grammar mistakes in there, some spelling errors, and even a few unfinished sentences. The flow of the story also wasn't quite there. I'd put that to jumping from one point of view to another. I see a lot of potential in this though. I loved some of your word choices and, like I said, the execution of the story line. Very nice.

Author's Response: I tried to fix up the errors you pointed out just now, I don't know if I got them all, but I will be sure to have someone else look over it soon! Spell check doesn't always work does it? :P I did the point jumping on purpose, but I promise to try and work on making it flow better :) thank you so much for the review and criticism! It's greatly appreciated!

-Sarah

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