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Review #1, by evanlyn Project Hell

10th June 2010:
Woot! I especially like that James laughed and Lily smacked him, its so sort of cute and playful. I'd like to think that Sirius secretly likes April, but maybe as they work together they will slowly fall for each other. I hope Lily and April become closer friends!
10/10
Evanlyn

Author's Response: i know its a bit late but maybe i'll start this story back up seeing as you love it so much ;D

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Review #2, by evanlyn No Second Chances

10th June 2010:
I'm so glad you brought Lily into this story! I like how everyone is sort of pairing up, its all setting up for some drama I'm sure!
10/10
Evanlyn

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Review #3, by evanlyn The Same Scene

10th June 2010:
I love how April is drawing attention inadvertantly and I wonder if the rumour about her is true - I think it is, and I hope this is like a romance story I love those! So excited to keep reading!
10/10
Evanlyn

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Review #4, by ericajen Project Hell

4th March 2010:
There were just a few spelling errors that I found; most likely typos. For example, in the last paragraph, it says 'corssed' instead of 'crossed'. Besides that, it was alright. It's a bit cliche at this point, but that's not to say it won't improve as it goes. Keep going.

Author's Response: thanks! i'll make sure to go and check that. and yeah, i do like uniqueness in my stories. but i couldn't think of any other way to get my story moving in the way it needs to. so hopefully there won't be many other cliche moments in future chapters. ;]

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Review #5, by sweet DEVASTATION No Second Chances

2nd March 2010:
another good chapter, like to see were this story is going! update soon :p

Author's Response: thanks so much!

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Review #6, by sweet DEVASTATION The Same Scene

2nd March 2010:
wow, interesting and really funny, in a way.
April is very good written so far, keep it up! really like this.

Author's Response: hey thanks for the first reply! and glad you like it. i've thought her through for awhile now. ;]

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