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Review #1, by Lmnop The Hogwarts Express

25th February 2010:
That was pretty short. And isn't scorpius older than lily?
It's intersesting that Harry gave lily the cloak and map. I would think he would keep them away from his children. I don't know. Sorry I'm a crappy reviewer, I tend to only notice the bad stuff. Keep writing, though.

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