wonderful story!! Love the way you portray your characters! pleassseee update soon!
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Ouch thats embarrassing. Good first chapter!!
Clea Smith;)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ Report Review
OMG pelase update!?
its funny and cute!
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Mad? That;s an interesting nickname. James does look a bit different now. Is he hitting on Mad? (i like that nickname) Anyhow, lovely chapter as per usual. Thank you for the update! :)
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Haha this was really funny, but a bit brief:)Author's Response: Thanks ^_^ And I know, the first few chapters are a bit short, but that's just because back then, it was a big step for me to even get to that word amount XD
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I think one Maddie Ackerly likes one James Potter, but won't admit it to herself or anyone else for that matter.
Entertaining chapter. I do enjoy this story.Author's Response: Maybe she does, maybe she doesn't :P
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I really like how easy it is to read and how easy it is to relate! I like Maddie already (and not just because she's a Ravenclaw, though that contributes to the factor).Author's Response: Oh, thank you! :D
Well, I wated to put her in a not-Gryffindor house and yeah, somehow she's always been a Ravenclaw, I didn't even ponder shoving one of the other houses down upon her :P
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no problem, hun :D I NEED TO READ A NEW CHAPTER LIKE..NOW OR SMTH MMKAY? ::Author's Response: Hehe :D
I can't let the next chapter out just yet... mainly because it's not done yet cos I keep on re-writing it :P
But I am soon going to update, that's for sure :D
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heheh, great chapter!
pleasepleasepelease update soon!
becky ;pAuthor's Response: Thankyou :D
I will update pretty soon, I think. I'm about 3000 words in with the next chapter sooyeahh.
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aw, please let them kiss!
loved the chapter! you rock! :)Author's Response: hehe, well, we'll see... :P
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aw, another brilliant chappie!
must read on!
becky ;p 100 million/10! yes, THAT good! :)Author's Response: I think I've said anything that I could come up with about, like 2 reviews ago, so the only thing I really do know I can say is thank you SO much! :D
oh god, them in detention is only going to be chaos :)
1 million/10! you're fanatstic!Author's Response: Yeah it willl XD
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heheh, she and James are so meant for eachother :)
loved it! (AGAIN!)
700/10! you rock!Author's Response: Hm, yeah, maybe... :P (James is still yummy, though. Juyst had to say it)
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m, chocolate from the hogwarts kithens, im so envious :)
loved it! (what else is new?)
becky ;pAuthor's Response: Meto, it's like yummy god, I can imagine. :D
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lol, greta last line, very funny :)
100/10! you rock! :)Author's Response: Haha, thanks(:
Ah, 100? Lol, I don't know if I'm that good, y'know.. :P but thanks, my ego apprechiates it XD
heheh, laughed so hard at that chapter :)
cant wait to read on!
you rock! (AGAIN!)
becky ;pAuthor's Response: You did? YAYXD
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heheh, loved the chapter :)
must read on!
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heheh, very good first chapter! can't wait to read more!
your newest fan becky ;p
10/10! ;DAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for the ahmazingg review :D Report Review
PLEASE update soon!:) This story is hilarious!
10/10Author's Response: I will, pretty soon... you know, if I get around to actually writing it and not lazing off :P
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I'm literally crying with laughter right now! You're hilarious xDAuthor's Response: Haha, I'm... glad? Er, sorry. I'm not glad that you cry, but I am glad that it' because of laughter :D
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That must be nice. After such a rather horrible night (she went for the groin kicking, then... can't say I blame her. At least she got ice cream afterwards :D), James still hasn't left. And then he had to go and follow her around... jeez. Quite annoying :P
And now James wants a truce? That's surprising. And he apologised? What, is he softening up? :O Must be quite confusing and sort of... disturbing to Maddie. Haha, and does he really want to know what happened when he was drunk?
Andy sounds pretty messed up too. Pink stilettos, I mean, really? Was he dropped on the head a bit too much as a kid?
The chess game sounded interesting. It's really a big thing in the Weasley family, it seems. Banners and flags and such? Wow. Huh, that's weird. Dom got mad at James because he and Maddie have a truce now? Where's the logic in that? :P And oh, the T-word? They're so mature :P
Why did James only apologise about what happened at the ball now? Did he suddenly remember? I mean, nobody could've reminded him of it, right, since no one else was there to witness it... right? :S I wonder how long that truce is going to last ;)
And that's quite a situation there... Gemma doesn't sound nice, and James seems to be enjoying this far too much. At least Maddie and Gemma agreed there, on one thing. And I agree with Maddie - she doesn't have to be nice to Gemma too, because of the truce.
Oh, yay, McLaggen >< Just what we needed, another big ego. Just wondering, since they're going back to Hogwarts only now, how did he follow her around all this time? Hm, I wonder what James will do, all this time, now that Maddie actually agreed to go out with McLaggen - yes, we've seen his first reaction, but maybe after a while... who knows what he'll do :P You'd think McLaggen wouldn't want anything to do with her anymore after she ditched him at the party and then forgot about him. Odd boy. The others impersonating animals in the background must've been hilarious indeed. Too bad Maddie couldn't actually laugh out loud, even if she did anyway. And James seems to like getting on her nerves anyway, regardless of the truce - while telling her she should be nicer. Yeah, right.
Hopefully you'll manage to update soon!Author's Response: Andy is a really messed up kid. I mean, he lives with Madeline, what else can you expect from him? :P
Hm, the reason Hames made the truce with Maddie ad was nice with her was that he did remember, he just didn't want to come off as 'Hey, I tried to snog you while I was drunk out of my wits, can we have a truce now and forget about it?', you know? So he pretended to not know..
yeah, banners and flags :P
Um, Dom was mad at James, because *cracks head to remember*, well, a truce between the two of them would lead to an inevitable Doom. XD
Yep, they're the poster children of mature-ness ^_^ lol.
Well, Maddie just had to let McLaggen be over at her house from the goodness of her heart... *cough*guilt*cough* Plus, he's a McLaggen. XD
James always gets on her nerves ;) Even if he did something completely great, she'd still be grupmy XD
Thank you so muh for the amazingly long review!! :D
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There are quite some 'so' words here. Is that a coincidence or are you doing it on purpose? Maddy has a date! Oh my gosh. And a truce at the same chapter! There's a lot going on in this chapter and I just love that :D
Thank you for the lovely update!
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Yeah, i don't really know how that happened :P
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The T-Word. Bawhahaha! I love it!
They can get together now, right?
*Sighs* Okay, okay. In a few chapters though, right?
More sooon please! I love this!Author's Response: Thanks so much :D Haha, the T-word part was fun to write (:
We'll seee... Maybe. I won't say. Well, actually, I don't know. Yet.
Oh, and I'm about a quarter or so done with chapter 11! :D
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oh my god. cliffhanger much? ughhh. thats so frustrating :) hahaha. anyways, i loved this chapter! :D it was super good. and i am honestly spazzing out right now since i have to wait to read the next part. gahhh. :P hehehe, mum-crush. I didnít know dementors had feelings. I mean, do you try to always look like youíve got Titanic shoved up your arse or does it come naturally? teeheehee. best lines ever. :)) so yeah, great job with the story so far, and this chapter especially, and i cant wait to read the next chapter! AHHH! :DAuthor's Response: It was my first cliffhanger EVER, I think. I was sooo excited about that XD
Ah, thankss, I love favourite liness ;) *hinthint*
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ahhh! okay, so i already reviewed chapter 1, and then i got distracted right after i left the review. so i just read up to this chapter today. hahaha, i have like no time to read anything on here, and i was pretty proud of myself for actually getting this far. im still going to finish reading it, just not right at this second because my friend is getting pissed at me for ignoring her to read your story. :) but anyways, i really like it so far! :D I LOVE JAMES. oh my god. like you don't even understand how much i want to marry him! for reals. hehehe, i honestly just start squee-ing when i think about him :)) like right now. *sigh* bahaha so yeah, at some point, hopefully later today, i will be able to finish reading, and ill probs end up reviewing for like a 50th time. so yeah. i love you. heheh keep up the great work! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Heh, I know how that can be ;p
James is... yeahh. XD
haha, I don't mind you reviewing 50 times :P
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