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Review #1, by LadyL8 Happy Valentines Day

8th July 2014:
Hello There.

Wow. Here I am trying to leave reviews for the house cup, and then I come across this story. This was heartbreaking!

I love how hurt and bitter Ginny sounds. You can tell she's hurt by the fact that they are not together, especially since it's Valentines day. But you can also hear how bitter and angry she is at fate and the world for forcing them to split, to be separated on Valentines day. And I think it's just great to see that side of Ginny, a girl who seems so composed and tough. But underneath it all she's a sad and heartbroken girl, who really misses her boyfriend, her love. And in my opinion, it's a very believable story and I really liked it.

I like how you constructed it as well, like the fact that you didn't reveal which day it was until the very last line. I liked that, because that lone line changed how you viewed the story. Because when you know it's Valentines day, it just makes the story sadder. Oh and by the way, loved the opening line! It really got me hooked

But anyway. I loved it. It was really great.

- Lotte

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Review #2, by xLauriePotter Happy Valentines Day

19th April 2010:
Awh, Sweet but sad... Maybe another story?! Where he's back from the war? Maybe :D?

- Laurie

Author's Response: I was actually thinking about writing one from Harry's point of view? I don't know how that would work out though..

Anyways thank you for taking the time to review! :D


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Review #3, by Niki :) Happy Valentines Day

18th March 2010:
Aw! This one's sad too. :( This one's super awesome too, like all of your stories. :D You can really get into the thoughts of Ginny and that's really cool. You know what would be awesome? If you could write a parallel of this with what Harry is thinking about Ginny. :O Maybe? Possibly? I don't know haha. :P But anyway, this is super duper amazing! :)

Author's Response: Ooooh! I like that! I'll totally hafta do that!! :D

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Review #4, by hp481516 Happy Valentines Day

6th March 2010:
This was so sad. Ginny is my favorite character. You did such a good job of describing how she must have felt. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you. I always figured she'd be pretty upset with Harry for leaving her on the hunt! Glad you liked it! :D

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Review #5, by Ashley Happy Valentines Day

5th March 2010:
as of right now i am so in love with Drinny fanfics but i liked yours. It was way too short, you should add more, add to the pain in the 1 or second pargraph. your not giving the readers that much info but well done.

Author's Response: Well thank you. I know I should add some more.. I guess I took out wayy too much then. I had a whole bunch written, but took some out. Thanks for the advice though! Glad you liked it! :D

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