I love this story but it is a little bit too much like The Book Thief is, style-wise ;) Report Review
That was a really interesting way to write this. I loved how different from the norm it was! Great job. And of course the story itself was nice and an enjoyable read!
:)BaletGirAuthor's Response: Most people just dote on the style of writing. But hey, that's what we get for trying to be different, yeah?
Thanks so much, I love reviews! Report Review
Very interesting. I haven't read The Book Thief, but I think some one told me that the narrator was death, is that right? That doesn't really come across, but I think it might be too morbid that way anyway.
I gather that you intended this to feel a little disjointed?
I like the concept. It's nicely done.
A point of clarification: Lily is a bit younger than Scorpius and Rose, yes?
Please keep writing!
-PeachesAuthor's Response: Yeah, the narrator is death. But that wasn't this. I just meant the style of the writing, not the narrator. But thanks. And yeah, 2 years younger. Report Review
Aw! I love Scorp/Lilly II! :)Author's Response: I don't really, but this was a challenge... so whatever. I'm Rose/Scorpius, actually. Haha. Thanks! Report Review
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