This is like the cutest ScoRose ever!!!
Its adorable! Report Review
This was really adorable.:) Report Review
amazing! you rock! make longer stories, maximize the epic-ness! Report Review
Favorite quote? "Malfoy snapped his wand in half and proclaimed his desire to become a Buddhist Monk." I was laughing so hard at this line... :D
I love Rose/Scorpius. They are so cute together. And I love how James and Lily's getting together was in there too :)
Awesome, I loved it!
~Sara Report Review
so i was recently made aware that this story is YOURS and not someone else's who plagiarized it...I LOVE THIS STORY! And I'm so glad I can give the real author credit :) keep up the amazing work Report Review
Hey I love this story and it makes really mad that someone on fanfiction. net ripped it off. They called it repeat it Report Review
So, ho hum, I had originally read this story on fanfiction dot net, until someone was kind enough to tell me it was actually from here. Anyway, I submitted a review there, and I've pasted it again here =>
Okay, this was amazingly original!
This is one of the best ScoRose stories I've read, and you've deliberately drawn the parallel between Rose and Lily. Unlike many other fics, the parallel is hinted at, but it's so much better explicit, as you have done.
Rose's internal voice is very engaging to the targeted audience, as most readers can connect/identify with it.
Also, you've managed to capture the lack of self-esteem in a good/bad relationship.
I think the best part though, is how Rose has actually DEVELOPED throughout the story. SHE CHANGED! Do you know how rare it is that characters actually develop? Sure, you see them being changed by different circumstances, but only sometimes a growing up/maturity thing!
Yeah. Well done! Report Review
All I want to say is I read all of your stories and they're really awesome! :D
There's a bloody author whose been copying my name and your amazing stories! >.<
I was so mad!
I reviewed all of them and said that it's wrong to copy some cool author's work.
Please help me clear my name!!
I need help.
Here's the URL of the one copying my name and your stories.
You gotta report it! Report Review
I just wanted to let you know that this story appears to have been plagiarized by someone named GirlNextDoor31 on fanfiction .net Report Review
This was so romantic and sweet!! Really wonderful! And I log the songs you chose to quote. I wish it was longer, though. It would be nice to see more of their relationship because while we know plenty about Lily and Rose, we don't know much about Scorpius and James' personalities. Actually, we do know a bit about James. There were several subtle hints about his interests. Like when Lily said she would pluck off each twig of his broom while he watched (in the first part from her perspective), that told us he was extremely fond of quidditch. But I feel like we knew very little about Scorpius. We knew he loved Rose, acted arrogant often, was poular, handsome, and the 'bad-boy of Gryffindor'. I'm not sure I understand what the last part means - is he a prankster?
It was very cute, though, and well-written. Report Review
Did I tell you " You are Awesome"?
If not, then I salute you and say-
"You are AWESOME! " Report Review
amazing!!! i always love the history-repeating-itself stuff! adorable story too. write more!! Report Review
way amazing! plz write some more scorpius/ rose fanfic's Report Review
I've just read this story again and thought again it is wonderful.
I know I sound like an idiot if I say this but I have to ... : Flourish and Blott's is in Diagon Alley not Hogsmeade that's Scrivenshaft's. Please don't be angry with me.
Cheers Report Review
Scorpius is so sweet :) Report Review
Oh, god. Scorpius Malfoy and James Potter: ruining men for me. Especially the way you write them.
"I want a refund on life." This might just be the most identifiable quote ever spoken.
Also: "Itís final. The world has officially ended. Dumbledore shagged McGonagall. Voldemort kissed a muggle. Malfoy snapped his wand in half and proclaimed his desire to become a Buddhist Monk. Snape washed his hair. THE WORLD HAS GONE ABSOLUTELY WONKY."
This just made me laugh my ass off. In fact, the whole of Liky and James' date was...nice. So so nice. Report Review
After reading two of your amazing stories, I creepily went to your author's page (in case you haven't noticed yet) and am slowly making my way through every story you've written. And I love this one just as much, if not more, than all your others. It's so cute and ABSOLUTELY HYSTERICAL and I can't even describe how much I love the parallels between past and future. Every little random moment has characters from other stories (pretty sure, I haven't read most of them yet) and Petunia's keeping the box was really awesome to me. Most definitely 10/10!!! You know the drill - I'd fave if I could sign in. Report Review
ohhh. MORE! ME WANT MORE! Report Review
Holy freaking crap. This is too amazing for words. :) I'm in love. Def something I will favorite and come back to read when I'm feeling down. I'm a lot like Lily and Rose, no I don't have a James Potter stalker, but in the other ways and it just really touched me. It reminded me that people like me can find love. That there's someone for everyone (hopefully). It was funny, touching, romantic and beautifully written. I loved it so much. 10/10 Report Review
awww, love this story too! so sweet :)
Itís final. The world has officially ended. Dumbledore shagged McGonagall. Voldemort kissed a muggle. Malfoy snapped his wand in half and proclaimed his desire to become a Buddhist Monk. Snape washed his hair. THE WORLD HAS GONE ABSOLUTELY WONKY.
this has to be my fave quote :) Report Review
I LOVE the way you write! You've convinced me of Rose and Scorpius! The way you portray them is amazing! I love the way you link their romance to Lily and James'! THANK YOU! Report Review
Yup- Me again just reading all your stories hehe
anyway- I'm not ashamed to say I teared Up, just a bit
that was so cayuute! Report Review
I LOVED THE QUOTE FROM JAMES AFTER LILY WALKED IN ON HIM JUST GETTING OUT OF THE SHOWER!!! He said seriously, gazing into my eyes. ďItís nothing that I donít plan on you seeing Ė WAIT! That wasnít supposed to come out, forget I said that ĖĒ hehe. BEST QUOTE IN THE CHAPTER!!! : ) Report Review
"you despise anything with eggs in it, because your cousin once told you they were chicken period, and youíve never been able to get that out of your head. Youíre nosy, you like stealing diaries to find things out, and you spend way too much time reading. You cry really easily, and you are extremely violent when pissed off. You say and do the most awkward things sometimes; your friends adore you, but even they tell you that youíre embarrassing to be around at times."
Yep, this is pretty much me. Ew chicken period, my best mate told me that and i CANNOT eat eggs now. I am embarrasing to my friends. well this is all like me except i dont cry easily... except in sad movies... and happy movies... and scary movies... well okay this is like me but y'know these thins happen.
xxxMissMademoiselle Report Review
I've never thought of the Rose and Scorp relationship like that, but it's so funny!! :D
I loved the way to put James and Lily's story into it.
Can't wait to read more of your stories, your a great writer!! Report Review
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