really great one shot of harry and dudley

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I like it a lot! Its a realy good start to getting Dudly back into Harrys life. I have always wondered what happened to the Dursleys!

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An interesting topic. It was done nicely. The part about Dudley getting tossed out of a bar was an original idea, and I like it. I wouldn't have thought that they would have hit it off so fast, but you seem to have it together.

Nicely written

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pretty good so far I give it a 8/10 and I cant wait to see more.

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This was really different, not what I expected. I was shocked that the girl was blind. Anyway, update with the next chapter and lets see where you take us. PS...I liked how happy Harry seemed to be.

Author's Response: I hope that it was different in a good way! I suppose it could have been a little smoother, but I'm overall happy with the way it turned out. Here's to wishful thinking that Dudley isn't so bad after all, huh? Thank you so much for your review! It is incredibly appreciated :]

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That was sooo sad. Though I think after Harry ponders it a bit he'll at least look into it. I would have thought whoever took the Dursleys back home would have told them that it was safe? This is a scenario I've never thought of. You did a good job with it.

Author's Response: Oh no! It wasn't meant to be sad, I swear! I just have something against Dudley, maybe? Something tells me he wasn't the brains at school, and I suppose that that didn't get him very far in life. Still, I think he's done a lot of growing up. Thank you muchly for the wonderful review! :]

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