Wow, that was a beautifully written one-shot!
I loved it, and it was so intriguing!!!
I love stories that leave you asking questions and you've got me hooked now ... when will Possessed be posted? I cannot wait to read what becomes of this amazing sneek peek!
10/10 and I'm favouriting!
~LizzieAuthor's Response: Possessed has already been posted! (finally) Thank you!-Jez Report Review
Wow, you are such a good writer! With a summary like that, I had to read this! Update soon!!Author's Response: Thank you! The summary has to be good, doesn't it? Because it's what the viewers see. And I promise I'll update the second chapter soon! Thanks again.-Jez Report Review
I loved it. Can't wait to read your story.Author's Response: Thank you. Actually, Possessed is actually posted up, if you didn't already know. Thanks again!-Jez Report Review
What a start of a mystery. Bravo!Author's Response: Thank you! My friend is always telling me the end is the beginning of a story. I didn't understand until I read her stories, and it adds suspense as well. Well, Possessed was posted up a few days ago. Thanks again for the review!-Jez Report Review
I liked this story a lot, it was really well written. The ending is really confusing though. I know it'll probably make sense within the rest of the story though. But maybe for this preview the part in the great hall should have been left out.Author's Response: Most people HAVE said that. But since I will be putting this story as a chapter in Possessed, already validated, I had to leave it as a cliffy. Sorry if you don't understand, it will be explained in Possessed. Thank you for reviewing!-Jez Report Review
Wow!!! I have to say wow!! Very well done, u have talent.Author's Response: Thank you! This was my first fanfic, and it's fun to know that new people are still reviewing. Thanks again. -Jez Report Review
I'm sorry I couldn't review sooner Jez! I barely got on after the earthquake in Mexico and had no time to read, only write because of the people waiting. I love it! Can't wait till Possessed because I'm helping! Ha ha ha. You're a very gifted writer! See you later!-Triss *^_^*Author's Response: Yea... I heard about the earthquake, how are your relatives? Fine? Freaked out? How can you have time to read, Beatrice Naiadia?! You're too generous and nice for your own good. Thanks for the review. And I'm sorry I didn't tell you about Messenger!Thanks again! I'll talk to you later!-Jez Report Review
yeah it was great but the end realy confused me for a while. maybe you should be more specific next time but great work for a first fan fic im impressedAuthor's Response: it isn't really the ending, you see. It keeps on going (or the story starts) in Possessed, which is still not posted up. Hope you read more! Thank you for the review!-Jez :] Report Review
Very Good writing. I love the plot, can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thank you! Although I've been having problems with my computer and exams are coming up, I'll post Possessed soon!-Jez Report Review
that was really goo i like how you described everything but left to the imagination.Author's Response: Thank you. *bows down* I appreciate the review. Hope you read Possessed! Thanks!-Jez Report Review
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