This was a great one shot. Very powerful. Short and sweet just the way it should be. I've read a few fics about the whole day after scenario with Harry and many of them just couldn't capture it correctly. But you definitely have in just these few short paragraphs.
p.s. I've missed your reviews over at Found/Lost You :) I've posted a few new chapters. The validation time is killing me though. I've posted chapter 11 and I'm currently writing chapter 17. Bahhh. I want you to read it. It's getting so good. At least it is in my head. Haha. Anyway loved your fic!!Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much for this lovely review :) I'm really pleased that you like it. I feel the same about one-shots; short and sweet :D
and I've been working like 40+ hours a week and going to school where I get homework that I need to do... so I never feel like reading after. But I will get back to reading asap!
Thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
It was such a nice story!!! A touching one. m adding it 2 my favorites.
Keep writing... :)Author's Response: Aw!! Thank you so much! I'm really pleased with this story, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much! I really appreciate you leaving this review! :D Report Review
I loved this story. You captured one of my favourite scenes in the books with Colin's last picture. I was reading DH late in the evening and almost woke up my wife when I got to the scene where Neville cut off Nagini's head, so to see it captured as the final picture in the story moved me.
I can feel Harry's emotion as he looks through the pictures and it feels just right to me. It always amazes me when someone captures good emotion in a short piece. You do a good job showing Colin's personality through Harry's reminiscences.
Beautiful and moving.Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! This plot bunny hit me as soon as I read your challenge, and I worked really hard to make it just right, so I'm really pleased that it went over so well :]
I really don't know what else to say! I'm pleasantly stunned with your review! Thanks so much! :D Report Review
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