I absolutely love Hannah/Neville but I rarely ever see it. Please follow up on this as it is rather good and adorable :)Author's Response: Aw, thank you dear! I'm glad that you're enjoying this story - hopefully once I get back in the swing of writing again I can give this another shot! Thank you for reading and reviewing :) Report Review
Hmmm. Well, it's sweet. I will give it that. But, I think Hannah overreacted a bit. Or maybe it's just that we don't know her so well so it seems that way. If you lengthen that scene and add a little more description - something Neville sees on her face, something he senses about her manner - it'll be more believable.
Also, it would definitely take longer for Neville to cheer her up. At least that's my experience with the heavier emotional stuff.
Pretty good. You need a little editing, but pretty good.Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestions. They're very helpful :) I will definitely give it another look and revise the scene as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
oohh i finally read the sequel to that fantastic one-shot! sorry if it took me so long though. Hannah is well portrayed and so is Neville. i like how u write them together, they're a great couple. will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: The next chapter is in progress, so I sure hope I can update within the next month or so :) But thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Aw It's really beautiful Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
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