Please update more chapters. I think I check daily for updates of this story.
P.S: if you can... make Nalani a Slytherin :P Report Review
BRING ON CHAPTER 7!
Jimmer is barely more interesting than THIS!Author's Response: I'm so sorry this update is taking so long. I moved recently, so a lot of my projects were on Hiatus. I promise the other updates will e faster... i unfortunately lost my draft of this chapter in all the moving.. so i'm trying to rewrite it... very sorry again! Report Review
Please tell me that Nalani will end up in Slytherin!Author's Response: You'll have your answer in the next chapter ;-)!! Report Review
Just to let you know, this is the ONLY fanfiction i check daily! So hurry up with the next chapter! Report Review
UPDATES ARE NOT FAST ENOUGH!hurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryup!
Are you allowed to co-author? Send the co-author (every other) chapter summaries and key points/interactions, they elaborate, you read and edit their chapter? When you decide to do a sequel, can you suprise us by not telling us and write half the story beforehand, uploading it's chapters weekly? ANYTHING TO SPEED UP CHAPTER UPLOADS!
Nice touch of irony, Nalani telling Harry the answers to the book's Day 1 Pop Quiz. Does the Hufflepuff card mean anything, like Harry's mentioned Flammel? Never mind, surprise me.Author's Response: Sorry if I'm a bit slow lately, I recently moved out and now i'm preparing for an admission exam for 2d animation, so it's been real crazy lately. I'll have something posted soon I promise! Report Review
Very cool! Another great chapter! :-) Report Review
Hehe.love the family names! ;-)Author's Response: Loo Jew XD... I had to... did you spot the Montreal references? Report Review
Another wonderful chapter, but why so much space between paragraphs? I almost got tendinitis from all the scrolling down! LOLAuthor's Response: I dunno, the web site does it. sorry! Report Review
I love Snape. He's one of my very favorite HP caracters, but the man just can't keep control of a situation like...a conversation with a bunch of kids! LOL Report Review
Oh boy! This chapter is even better! I like how Snape can be quite informative and considerate, if only in a very formal way, while being his usual dry, sneering self. But them he's always been like this. And yes, the kids are already getting on my nerves! LOLAuthor's Response: Already? But, it's only the 2nd chapter! Report Review
Cool idea. I've always been crazy about crossover stories! :-) Report Review
It is going really well so far. I can't wait for more, and i can't stop guessing what will hapen! They aren't coming fast enough for me! I would love to have this go through all seven books!!!
I have some really good guesses as to what could happen, things that would be sweet and unanticipated. I don't want to post them here - if the author does them, posting them now could be a spoiler - but i'd love to send the author an email of my ideas.Author's Response: Well send your ideas at lokitaparasiempre at lavache dot com (the thing won't let me put email addresses) , I'm always glad to here ideas. I wish I wrote faster and more, but I'm also working full time, going to school and working on a comic. So bear with me please, I'm trying my best. I'd love to hear your guesses and ideas so please do email them :-)! And I'm really glad you like it :-) I enjoy writing this story, and... I really hope to go through all seven books (for now i concentrate on book one). And, I don't want to give anyone any false hopes, but I have at least 2 other ideas of fanfics I want to work on :) Report Review
More, more, more, more, more! Will she falling in love with Harry?Author's Response: Glad to see you like it, I try to update as often as I can. Do you really think i'll answer that and spoil you?? tsk tsk! You'll have to keep reading to find out! Report Review
Too hot! I want more. And i saw a little bit of you in Nalani. I can almost say that I know Nalani :) because I know you. I am going to read the chapter 2 right now. Good work Lokita :):) Report Review
why didnt i see this earlier!
im in loveAuthor's Response: Thank you so much, Sorry I didn't reply earlier, I just saw your review. Report Review
Wow, awesome chapter!
Seriously, I never would've thought mixing Avatar: The Last Airbender & Harry Potter would work out all that smoothly, but, one word: Wow.
Once again, awesome chapter, & I really like how you pull the plot along. :) Report Review
Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I love the elemental concept, and you write very well. You have me as a regular reader!Author's Response: Wow thanks tons! I'm trying to keep my updates as regular as possible, but I've got loads of projects. Don't worry though, next chapter coming pretty soon :-)! Report Review
I want more, I think Snape is going to eat them for breakfast.
Good jobAuthor's Response: Every one is scared of Snape, except Kiran... but he's... weird. Report Review
It's intriguing I am waiting for next chapter already...goody! Report Review
Looking foward to reading the rest of it.. very interesting... Report Review
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