Cool. There are a couple of grammar mistakes but not to worry - no one's perfect. I like it!Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you like it. Report Review
this is too much like the original harry potter series...sorry Report Review
i love this story!
okay that was the positive
the negative is that it went too fast for me to keep up, but keep writing :) Report Review
Wow! Nice, I'll say. I'm gonna add it to my favorites... the story reminds me of HP 1st part.
Keep writing... :)Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter should be up soon but I'm having a bit of writers block. I'll try to update soon. Report Review
I enjoyed the chap, but one query. When Neville says he's from Hogwarts, how does she know that it is school for witches and wizards?(line 7)
Anyways, I'm reading on...Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. She knows because he says Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry so she assumes she's a witch.
It's really interesting so far. I really like it.
Love that Professor Longbottom is the one to tell Alex she's a witch.
I can't wait to find what happens at Hogwarts! UPDATE!!!Author's Response: Thanks!
Chapter two should be up by the end of the week. Next chapter is about Victoire getting her Hogwarts letter.
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