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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Hermione389

28th February 2011:

Cool. There are a couple of grammar mistakes but not to worry - no one's perfect. I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you like it.

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Review #2, by jojo_Scorpman

Slytherin: Good with a lot of Evil

13th September 2010:

this is too much like the original harry potter series...sorry

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Review #3, by jojo_Scorpman

Hogwarts?

13th September 2010:

i love this story!
okay that was the positive
the negative is that it went too fast for me to keep up, but keep writing :)

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Review #4, by Riya Potter

Slytherin: Good with a lot of Evil

5th September 2010:

Wow! Nice, I'll say. I'm gonna add it to my favorites... the story reminds me of HP 1st part.

Update soon^_^

Keep writing... :)

Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter should be up soon but I'm having a bit of writers block. I'll try to update soon.

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Review #5, by Riya Potter

Hogwarts?

5th September 2010:

I enjoyed the chap, but one query. When Neville says he's from Hogwarts, how does she know that it is school for witches and wizards?(line 7)

Anyways, I'm reading on...

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. She knows because he says Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry so she assumes she's a witch.

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Review #6, by Two Fifth- Lord

Hogwarts?

29th March 2010:

It's really interesting so far. I really like it.
Love that Professor Longbottom is the one to tell Alex she's a witch.

I can't wait to find what happens at Hogwarts! UPDATE!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Chapter two should be up by the end of the week. Next chapter is about Victoire getting her Hogwarts letter.

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