I, for once, find myself more attracted to Scorpius than others, with the exception of Dom. Let's see, he's mentioned several times and that was just it, I wish I could read more about him (I bet I could later, though). Overall, I like this story. Can't wait for the next installment :DAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review! Report Review
Aw, I love this already. What a great start!
Great characterization. Dom is amusing as is James, and I love how easily irritated Rose is.
The flow is also very nice. Not too fast, not too slow, and the dialogue is very believable and logical. I like that.
Not to mention the French from Fleur was a nice touch.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Report Review
i liked your your first chapter looking forward to the next oneAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review! Report Review
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