I actually really like it! Its really good, hope you keep writing more =)

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I love the flashback, tis funny! I also love brotherly James, I think Lara should give it up. The slag thing so isnt working for her. And James should just confiscate all the stuff he doesnt approve of! Id find that funny and would love to hear what pablo would have to say about it -Kirsty x

Author's Response: i agree, Lara is being rather dumb at the moment but then if she wasn't she wouldn't be Lara

thanks xx :)

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Ok this story is more than a little random...in a charming sorta way I guess!.it just seems like there ought to be more tension between the guys and Lola you know? But keep writing! I cant wait to see what comes next!

Author's Response: yeah i know exactly what you mean but i don't know hot to change it dramatically and thx for reviewing :)

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update soon! i absolutely adore thgis story!!!

Author's Response: thankkkss :) *beams*

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UPDATE SOON!!! I LOVE IT!!!

Author's Response: thx for always reviewing it makes my day :)

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Maddie! I just got to read three chapters in a row since ive missed your updating recently! YAY!!! Still loving it! And I think she should get over James and get under Sirius (wink wink) no i kid I kid, But she should get with Siri! He' so sweet! - Kirsty xxx

Author's Response: haha i agree totally that she should get with Siri and i have the power to make that happen :)

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update soon:P loving it.

Author's Response: updated :)))

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update soon i love it so far

Author's Response: thx :) love love love reviews

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ahahahahaha!!! Okay, I love James' shouting, it bloody hilarious!! And her full name being shouted ha! Please update more, its funny! -Kirsty xxx

Author's Response: Thx Kristy for the review :) xx

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haa i have to say that you have a good sense of humour

Author's Response: :) yayayayayayay

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hehehe! Poor girl, running out in her underwear, but on the upside a shirtless James. I like your idea and this is good for a first fan fic! God knows my first chapter was a mess! Anywho, good job, please update soon- Kirsty x

Author's Response: shirtless James does make my day, can't lie and thx for review :)

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