I really loved the story. You did a really excellent job. I have just recently started reading the Rose/Scorpius stories and enjoy them a great deal. The story flowed well. 15/10Author's Response: Whew, I'm glad you liked it! I'm totally looking forward to writing more next-gen stories - it's a scary thought, but whatever xD Report Review
I know just how you feel, cheating is simply unacceptable in every way possible. However, I also believe that one has to hear both sides of a story before they come to any sort of conclusion. If Rose had listened to Scorpius, she would have realized that he never loved Dom, and that he hadn't really done anything wrong. That kiss before he proposed was all Dom's doing (right?). I really like the way you wrapped this up, and you did a great job showing just how Rose was feeling. Excellent story.Author's Response: Yay, thank you! :D I personally liked how they kinda took that break, Rose and Scorpius. I mean, it gave Rose time to get to know herself, and to be independent, which she had never been before, so... in a way, it was all good. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
It was really good! I would never leave a comment like that by the way, even if it did suck (which it didn't by the way). I just really love your writing. I know I say it everytime, but it's true. You should try writing some nonfanfic stuff and see where it takes you! :DAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks :D I lack imagination, so non-fanfiction really wouldn't work for me all that well :D But I appreciate the suggestion - and review, of course! Report Review
It was really good! I love your writing! I am going to have to read all your stories!! Love it :DAuthor's Response: Oh no... xD I mean, the earlier writings I did are just... awful. You can tell it's a newbie spreading her wings there, but I think I've become slightly better with time and practice xD I really should edit those earlier stories I've written. Report Review
SO GOOOD! :)) I LOVE LOVE LOVED ITAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Aw, I loved this one! Yes, I hate cheaters, too ... but I too believe in second chances. She's tough on him as she has to be but it's obvious he's suffered and she's open to starting over ... This way we get our happy ending and we can imagine Scorp will do everything to make it up to his Rose ... It's what real romance is all about. Well done! :-)Author's Response: Aww, thank you :) I really appreciate reviews like these! Thank you so much! Report Review
Sorry to disapoint but I just loved this fic. And the fact that Scorp was a mess and suffered A LOT helped my concious to be ok with the forgiving him part :DAuthor's Response: Geez, I already blinked at the "Sorry to disappoint" part and thought you hated it :D Anyway, thanks for the lovely review ^_^ Report Review
Awesome short story! I loved it!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! ^_^ Report Review
nice way to challenge yourself :) i like it! and somehow i think rose weasley is a second-chance person too. maybe considering her parents? whichever, nice writing. i'm excited to see how scorpius is going to handle this.Author's Response: Actually, I don't think I'm going to write a sequel to it. It's completed as it is :) Report Review
ouchh, i always thought rose and scorp as an ideal couple, i guess not.Author's Response: Huh. So did I - then I got an idea, and we all know how dangerous that is xD Report Review
really really good fic :DAuthor's Response: Thank you ^_^ Report Review
I thought it was great. I'm of the thinking that sometimes you have to put the character, however much you like them, through a bit of crap for a good story. And this was indeed a really good read =] spam_up_samAuthor's Response: Yayness :) I'm so glad you liked it! It's always nice to read reviews like this... they make me happeee ^_^ Report Review
I love happy endings :') xoxo ~MarciaAuthor's Response: Aww, don't we all :) I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
Oh wow... xoxo ~MarciaAuthor's Response: I assume it's a good 'oh wow' :D Report Review
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