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Review #1, by Kirsty Weasley The truth about Remus

16th February 2010:
aww, James is so cute, he loves her even with the baby :) -Kirsty x

Author's Response: Yes he does very much.

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Review #2, by Real_Fantasy The train

30th January 2010:
its a really good story so far...a great twist in the past :)
there is just a little issue about grammar...instead of using the present tense, you should actually be using the past tense, like, "Lily leaned back on the seat. "Thanks, James," she said.
I am so sorry if you have taken this offensively, i don't have any intention of criticizing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

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