I really love this story, the plot, the writing, the characters, everything. Do you write professionally outside of this? However, really, this is great. Thank you.

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Congratz with making an amazing story!
I don't know about the first question, seeing as I am a new reader, but please don't change the title. I really like it..
Poor Rachele, her death made me cry :'(

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please don't change the name and no recaps please

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Hey! I love your story, and I don't think you should change the title. I really can't wait until you get your next chapter up, I'm so excited to know whats going to happen. I think including recaps would be awesome, also just post your chapters whenever your finished with them, I don't know about anyone else, but Im just excited to keep reading your amazing story

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Hey. It's me, Em Rose and im sorry I didn't review sooner, I was just... kinda upset that you wouldent update this story, so I just quite it altogether. Looking back, I relize it was childish and stupid, but yeah. I really love this story and hope you update soon.

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LOVING the story, every well written and I love all of the decription you put with everything! I cannot wait for more!!!

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Ilove your story, and I can't wait to read more, please put up your chapters as soon as you can, once they are finished, post them! That would be so great, I really want to see what comes next, I don't think you should include recaps, I know as a writer that they are boring and time consuming. But I don't think you should change the name unless you post your next chapter with a note saying that if you want to read the story the new name is "State name here" because otherwise I probs won't be able to find your story to keep reading it. Haha

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i like the name of the story it kinda fits the character hope to read more soon

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I am in LOVE with this story. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

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yah u shld add recaps befpre chaps amd pls dont change the name as it desribes ryu s character so wonderfully and i think the story is just great the whole concept of ryu is tooo great to grasp at once every scene that takes place was imagination and damn good imagination it was .the story is really there and there just cant wait for the next upload do so soon pls will miss it!

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THANK YOU i love it soosoo much i love it u cant belive how hard i laghed my big bro came in my room and was like WTF IS WRONG WITH U of corse now he thinks im crazy wait scrath that he always thought i was crazy oh well btw luv the ryu/serios action

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i love it!
the plot
the characters.
i cant get enough, and i cant wait for more!
your an amazing writer :)
keep up the good job :D

Author's Response: I feel like my heads going to explode if I get any more compliments!! lol You guys are seriously awesome. I'm so happy you like the story and I'll do my best not to keep you waiting for the next chapter too long. It means a lot to me that you thought my story was good and that you took the time to review! THANK YOU!

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out of all the stories ive read on hpff this one is the best

Author's Response: WOW I really don't know how to respond to this other than to say thank you SO much. You seriously made my whole month! You've been such a good reviewer from the start I'm gonna have to give you some credit for me even continuing to post! wow. I don't know what else to say! Your the best! :D

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I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
its just so ingenious! they way you wrote it is seriously creative you honestly didnt even copy anyones ideas that i know of and i LOVED it pleease please PLEASE write more cause this is just amazing!

Author's Response: I'm SO thrilled you enjoyed the story as much as you did! And I appreciate your acknowledgment of my originality. I really try to be as creative as possible without compromising my integrity by resorting to any sort of plagiarism. This is all me :) I can assure you of that! Thanks for reading and thank you even more for reviewing! I hope you continue to do so!

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“What's a road-e-o?” Haha! I love this! I used to rodeo so it made me laugh!

Author's Response: hehehe I laughed when I was writing it lol. Then again I laugh at some pretty stupid things too. ANYWAYS thanks so much for reviewing! It means the world to me, especially considering you liked it :)!!!

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OMGG---please please please update soon..loved it..:)

Author's Response: Sorry the update was a long time coming! Christmas was busy for me, as I'm sure it was for you as well. I really appreciate you reviewing so consistently, you and a few others have been really good about it and you guys are really the only reasons i continue to share this story. Thank you so much and I hope you enjoy the new chapter! I love hearing from you!



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loved it! please get sirious and ryu together soon...i love yur story

Author's Response: Thanks so much I'm glad you like it! Can't promise Ryu and Sirius will get together very soon, but I can promise tons more interaction! Hope you continue to read and enjoy!

~tiberiusirius

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Thanks so much for the update...:)

i was really looking forward to this chapter..and now the same goes for the next one..:)

keep up the good work.
arrggghhh...can't wait for next update..:D
heehee

Author's Response: I wish I didn't have to keep any of you waiting, unfortunately I can only do so much! So glad you took your time to review, and even more glad that you enjoyed the story! :D Makes me feel good lol!

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I LUV IT! im amlst dieing waiting to see where ryu gets sorted! i luv sirus/ryu relation ship! cant wait for the next one

Author's Response: Lol please don't die! that would be terrible! Hope I didn't keep you waiting too long :) and I hope you enjoyed the following chapter! any who...Thanks so much for the review...I love the encouragement lol, makes me want to write more!

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i loved it cant wait for the next one i love ur writing keep up the good work

Author's Response: Yay!!! you love my writing! feels nice to here those words lol! Hope you enjoy reading more of it :D

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OMG..i love your stor so far...pleasse update..:)im begging youu..;)

keep up the good work...(Y)

:D

Author's Response: No need to beg lol! I'll keep writing as long as I continue to feel people enjoy it! Thanks for being a reason I continue :)!

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OMG! I love you for writing this!! Im really bad at not reviewing till I read all there is to read and Im friggin sorry!! This makes me laugh! I love it! I NED MOORREEE!! Please!

Author's Response: I'm the same way unfortunately :/.But regardless one review is better than none! And I absolutely lovvve hearing from you guys!!! Especially when I hear I was able to make you laugh! Yay! Thanks so much!

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This is really good. I agree with all the other reviews in this story, on a few different things. On the first review, they said the A/N got them interested. It did the same for me. The second, they put that you should spell out the numbers. I agree. The third review talked about grammar. I was thinkin' the same thing. A beta is someone who fixes all of those errors. For more info, you get ask me more on my Meet The Author page, found on my profile on this site. I can also be your beta.

9/10

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story! :D and I've been doing alot of editing so I'll keep in mind to write out the numbers as I go back through. I've definitely been considering a beta because it seems that after I've edited a chapter, when I go back to look at it, I only find more frustrating mistakes. Yet I'm a little uneasy about it all because I'm unsure how little tweaks, done by a person who doesn't know the direction I'm heading in, might affect the plot. I'm still weighing the pros and cons, just haven't convinced myself yet... I'm sure i'll give in eventually lol! Anyways! Thanks for reading and especially giving me advice on how I can improve :) Keep it up!

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HAHA Jason has a one track mind.

Lil_Miss_James_Black

Author's Response: Lol! Yes, yes he does! This review definitely made my day and made me laugh! Hopefully I can return the favor! :P

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Good Good as always, but make sure that Dumbledore always has a capital D.

Lil_Miss_James_Black

Author's Response: Gahh I'll get right on that! Thanks for letting me know. It put a smile on my face to know you got passed my mistake and still liked it! Thanks!

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