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Review #1, by Tinkerbell01 Snowfall

20th February 2010:
Hey there!

I think I've read some of your work before, but I may be wrong. I'm glad that you've requested again, if I'm not! :)

I love the atmosphere you have set in this first chapter. It's very calm and serene. You write very well; you don't use big words that people can't understand and your flow is perfect.

At first when I started reading, I wondered who the person was that was telling the story and as I got to the third paragraph, I think it was and saw James Potter, I automatically thought of Lily. Who else would James chase after? I like that. How you made me wonder. It gives us a chance to see who the narrator is and what it's really about.

I'm interested to see where you take this and to see if Lily actually hooks up with Tommy or if she finally goes with James, so feel free to re-request when you have the second chapter up!

I didn't see anything wrong, so I have no CC to give you!


Great job!


xx

Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review! yeah, i requested on your thread awhile ago so i thought i might as well do it again. i am glad that you thought this started out alright and will definitely request again when i post the next chapter.

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Review #2, by Sara C. Snowfall

27th January 2010:
I liked it; I hope you will keep writing. Update soon.

Author's Response: thank you so much. you can definitely count on an update relatively soon i'd think. i am hoping to get another chapter of one of my other WIPs finished first and then i will check back into this one. have a great day!

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